rate_review Reviews

like the begining, simple and with both perspectives. very nice!!

great beginning, i can't wait to see where the story goes from here.

Oooh! I love this idea. By all means, let's move along to the Hogwart's Express...

I like the beginning of your story. I find that you've really taken your time, and put a lot of thought into it, instead of rushing through the "explanation" either before or after the defining event, to put it plainly, this story doesn't feel rushed at all. I appreciate that!! Good beginning!

I like this. Good start! I think what I liked most was Draco finding out on his own, in addition to all the quirky book titles, facts about his life like his love of hot chocolate lol. A nice change from most veela type fics I've read, not that they're wrong or bad, it's just I have the distinct impression that most of the time someone is always telling him more or less "Hey little buddy you're a veela now", it's nice change of pace to see him use his brain and figure it out his own.

Ok, my only suggestion is to keep using your imagination and keep on taking that unique perspective. The only time I think a premise becomes cliched (like for instance Head Boy and Girl fics with adjoining rooms and the works) is when people get lazy and don't invent their own twists to things or if the characters are just too perfect etc. If every story is similar and the characters always perfect it becomes a bland and a "been there read" that read. But anyways, after reading the first chapter I'm curious to see how the rest will play out.

Kudos.

Wonderful! I can't wait for you to update! I love veela fics and there aren't enough out there. Can't wait!

sorry just reviewed and accidently deleted!! I was telling you that your story is promising, it is well written and I can't wait for more!!!

I just realised we can make requests! oooh, I'd like to see:

* Draco explaining this to his friends.
* Draco explaining this to Hermione, and her explaining more to him than he knew.
* Other ladies and lads tripping over themselves in a futile attempt to attract Hermione and Draco.
* Some outdoor nookie, by the light of a full moon perhaps?
* A unique romantic dinner for two (you decide on the how, what, where bit).

so great more please!!!