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wow !!!!

PLEASE update SOON! I love this story and really can't wait to find out what happens next!

nice keep it coming! :)

i like it a lot :) make draco and hermione get to know each other before she falls for him, and please make it original! X9

Please let Hermione grow into her looks, she can't have frizzy hair forever!! It depends how you write it draw the veela or straight to the point. I like Draco having to work for Hermione, give him a little challenge. Please update soon!!

Just wanted to tell you that I love this story and I can't wait to read more!

Ooo, well good start! Can't wait to see where it goes. Vixen x

I like it. Keep it coming.

ooh i like it
nice start!!! update soon........
(btw draco wid fangs?? lol)

Can you put a break between the bit where it jumps from Draco to Hermione? A few ... or *** or something similar would be nice!

Fangs! Oh I bet that was a shock and a half for him! Can you put in how he initially reacted to his new appearance? How did he find out about the fangs? (I can see him biting his tongue and wondering where the pain came from!).

If Hermione is his mate, then is she Veela too? Does that explain their tiredness? I guess they're having to go through something equivalent to puberty again so their bodies can transform. Talking of transformations... is Hermione going to change too. Will the curly mass she calls hair suddenly become blonde and sleek? Will she be able to transform into the crow-like-thingy from the quidditch world cup? Will she have the ability to capture the attention of men and have them do stupid things (like when Harry and Ron wanted to leap off the stands at the quidditch world cup.)

I'm VERY intrigued with this! I can't wait for more!