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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
green and blacks do a cracking hot chocolate too!
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. Very good opening scene to the whole crowd of hogwarts
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!! sorry i really like this story so far. i am excited to see where you take it to ^_^
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you like hot chocolate(and live reasonably close to a Starbucks, or a Barnes and Noble with a Starbucks Cafe), there's this lovely thing called Godiva Hot Chocolate. You should try it, it's spectacular.
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like how this has begun & can't wait to read more. Hope you add more chapters soon!
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i was sooo happy when u updated and i look forward to another. i loved the chap!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good chapter :) i'm very much looking forward to the next! i liked that you didn't have him trying to kiss her senseless or something like that or that she'd fall for him just at sight - your way makes it more believable
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely intriguing! Keep it coming.
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love that your building the attraction on Hermione's part. Something might be good have Draco be jealous, ( I know every stor has that) but it could be a new friend or Ron, Draco could be jealous or there friendship, just an idea. Please update soon!!
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A few sentences need a bit of tidying up - one or two didn't make much sense!
However, apart from a few minor difficulties, this was an excellent chapter! It flowed nicely and didn't have a rushed feeling to it; I could feel the length of the train ride as Hermione tried to ignore him, and how Draco tried to ignore the urges.
So, no dormant veela for Hermione, just the reaction to being a mate to one. I'm hoping she doesn't end up going out with Ron during the course of this fic - it would drive Draco insane and probably result in Ron's funeral!
What did his parents say? Or did he find the spell to hide his new "form" from everyone before they came home for his birthday celebration? I honestly can't imagine their reaction to the news that their "baby" isn't what they thought he was; I'm somewhere between 'shocked that the veela trait had landed on him' or 'upset that he isn't the perfect pureblood heir'.
Draco is being the perfect gentleman, and it is certainly nice to see that - manners are so much more positive than insults. I have been brought up to be polite (and so many young people today do not have good manners - they're free, use them! *grumble*) and it is wonderful to see Draco behaving in a more refined and friendly way towards Hermione. So sad that Hermione is convinced she's in the middle of a prank, but he deserves her mistrust after years of insults and hexing between them.
Personally, I think Draco is just what she needs, realistically I don't think her and Ron would last more than a few months. Hermione needs an intellectual equal to converse with, and, no offense JKR, Ron hasn't got the scruples to keep up with her!
Another brilliant chapter, and when I come up with a few more requests, I'll let you know. I hope you can squeeze a few of them in for me! *begs*
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However, apart from a few minor difficulties, this was an excellent chapter! It flowed nicely and didn't have a rushed feeling to it; I could feel the length of the train ride as Hermione tried to ignore him, and how Draco tried to ignore the urges.
So, no dormant veela for Hermione, just the reaction to being a mate to one. I'm hoping she doesn't end up going out with Ron during the course of this fic - it would drive Draco insane and probably result in Ron's funeral!
What did his parents say? Or did he find the spell to hide his new "form" from everyone before they came home for his birthday celebration? I honestly can't imagine their reaction to the news that their "baby" isn't what they thought he was; I'm somewhere between 'shocked that the veela trait had landed on him' or 'upset that he isn't the perfect pureblood heir'.
Draco is being the perfect gentleman, and it is certainly nice to see that - manners are so much more positive than insults. I have been brought up to be polite (and so many young people today do not have good manners - they're free, use them! *grumble*) and it is wonderful to see Draco behaving in a more refined and friendly way towards Hermione. So sad that Hermione is convinced she's in the middle of a prank, but he deserves her mistrust after years of insults and hexing between them.
Personally, I think Draco is just what she needs, realistically I don't think her and Ron would last more than a few months. Hermione needs an intellectual equal to converse with, and, no offense JKR, Ron hasn't got the scruples to keep up with her!
Another brilliant chapter, and when I come up with a few more requests, I'll let you know. I hope you can squeeze a few of them in for me! *begs*
9/10