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Wait... this means i have to put away my torch and pitch fork doesn't it...

damn it XI

anyway, smart move bringing back the story, it felt a bit rushed though in the fourth chapter... good luck with your muse...

and if its okay with you, i wanna write a fic and add in Draco telling Snape about being a Veela... just don't know if that woudl be like stealing or something... so i'm asking... :D (basically he'd react in the same manner)

AND i love the story~~~~~~~ please try to get another chapter up! and make it longer... with some bantering maybe? ^^ i love when they argue over pointless stuff...

i wont hold it against you only if you continue to update reguarly -)
I like the new chapter, you keep true to the caracters altough i would love to see draco a bit rougher and demanding, thats just my fantasy!!
Keep up the good work and i would like to reed a good fic about a rockband, if it includes draco haha!!

You are doing a fabulous job on this story! Keep it up.

I like it. Please update soon.

I'm so excited about this story!! It's going wonderfully! Sure, your chapters are shorter than some people's chapters, but it's nothing to apologize about. Your story is just so good, we want the chapters to go on forever!! I hope you'll hold on to your muse--I can't wait to see what it looks like for Draco to step up his next phase of "courtship". Great job!!

ANOTHER CHAPTER~~~~~~~~~~~~ and i love it ^^

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love this fic, mostly because i have fallen in love with Veela fics! Great job and post a new chapter please~~!

This is a lovely story. I'm a fan of a Draco veela story through and through. I found two errors. (You told us to let you know)

1. (No) nodded to her and turned to walk back to his seat. (he)
2. The last fifteen minutes (until) the train were more difficult that the last half hour.


Surprisingly for being non-beta'd I expected more mistakes. Your an excellent writer. That's a true compliment too cause I've read some not so good fan-fiction before. Please keep up this story I can't wait to see how everything turns out.

Did I mention how much I love this story? Not enough you say... well I LOVES IT! I love how your taking it slow. I also like how you have Hermione's reaction down for this. If I started have strange dreams about by enemy and said enemy started being nice to me I would suspect something was up and flee from my enemy like a frightened rabbit. Draco is ever suck a fox *giggles* I'm done making stupid jokes now... *loves the story to death some more*