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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to read all your chapters before reviewing. I am very pleased with the direction you've taken your veela!Draco....not that other authors have done the idea an injustice. But I like your more self-assured Draco....he is more like JKR's Fleur. And, now that Hermione's got that book, she'll be the usual 'brightest witch of her age' in figuring out what's what, I'm sure. With her forgiving nature, I can see they have a lovely future ahead. Unless you are going to throw in that nasty war....;D
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great Story man! I just have one thing to ask of you and that is plz dont stop writing the story becuz i have seen some authors do just that wen the story is getting gud. If u r at a block then ask for feedbacks or comments as to where u want to lead the story. An awesome story man. keep it up. cant w8 till the nex upgrade. Laterz
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story please continue
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sheer, not shear.
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January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Always enjoy veela stories and I like how this one is shaping up. Please update!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am hoping that you throw a rival into the mix, some other boy that takes an interest in Hermione. Perhaps she goes along with it, trying to get Draco out of her dreams, and desperate for someone else to fit the role of "him".
Anyway, good story, can't wait for more. (Literally can't wait, update soon.)
Anyway, good story, can't wait for more. (Literally can't wait, update soon.)
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and the way you write it. it's so compelling. update asap!! =]
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow i'm in love with this story after two chapters. ahh must keep reading!!
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i love this story
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I love Veela Draco/Hermione stories in general and this is an especially good one. I understand the writers block and stuff getting in the way. Due to this being my final year as an Undergrad I have become the writer we all hate: The one that doesn't update for months at a time, *sighs mournfully* hopefully I'll be able to update soon, becuase your story has inspired me to make more time for writing. Can't wait for more!