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schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should really update more!!! this story is GREAT!!!and as for the laws like that i know in kansas in the usa there is a law about should you sleep with a guy once or even say yes up to a point he has the right to your body every time afterwords no matter how much you dont want him too. and the third times the charm law... OMG i loved that take on it!!!!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, loved this chapter but I have to say, I don't think I would be able NOT to kiss Lucius (regardless of friends with benefits)NOR do I think I would be able to leave Lucius in bed -- something must have happened to your Hermione to not want to have any relationships esp. with your Lucius. Your Lucius says one thing but definately wants Hermione in all ways not just "friends with benefits". Look forward to the next update.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm. Nice. Despite how hot the sex was, I have to say my favorite part of this chapter is Hermione's refusal for a relationship. I can relate (not to the sex part, oh well), but it's nice to see another woman offered any form of intimacy with a good guy and refusing.

I can't wait to see how this develops, and how Lucius will react at work.
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Hermione is taking the no-emotional bit seriously. I feel sort of sorry for Lucius.
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Real good like it real funny.. i was laughing the whole time reading it... you are good at this story cant wait to read more... hope you update soon
person Amaris
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your intro already lol. You can chain Lucius up but I'd like to chain Sevvie up lol. Anway here I go gonna start now.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So... Are we going to learn how exactly Lucius and Hermione came to this "friends with benefits" standing? I'd really like to read more on the subject... as well as some detailed sexy time between the two.

Not much else to say. Good chapter, can;t wait for more!
person Citten
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can delete your chapter 12 it is a repreat of chapter 11 which is too bad cause i was so looking frward to it. though you could go back and give us much better details of lucius and hermiones evening! also question is hermione in any way shape or form intrested in having a family or wanting to have children or wanted to ease up on being an auaor at any time? just wondering.
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome update! LOL Poor Draco! He might be scared for life Lol! Please add more soon
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters (both 10 and 11) and by the way, now craving dark chocolate and LUCIUS! I like your story, glad Narcissa is not really in it -- I much prefer Hermione and Lucius together. Thanks for the updates.