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Oh poor Lucius. It sucks when you get the flu. Between Maggie and Hermione, he'll get better. Please add more soon

okay lots to say. first thanks for the kitchen seen. :) second like the way you gave us the background on hermione. boy the poor girl now i am getting her little by little. but as the saying goes she just needs the right person and lots of time and patience. next, i love abouslutely loved lucius listening at the door! :) now poor baby (lucius) i hate-hate being sick espically with the flu! sleep is great once you can find it, it always seems to allued me when i am sick. well now i am ready for the next chapter.....anytime now.....that was you opening. so now i get to wait...okay...so i take it i forgot to say something. i loved nannamag it makes both of the malfoy seem that much more human and i love it. so better......

Chapters 12-14: Oh my goodness, we

Oh. My. GOD! So cute! I just... *Squee!*

That was great! I was worried that you weren't going to have the scene between Hermione and Lucius played out. Excellent writing! I can't wait to see how uncasual this relationship gets. Update soon.

Ooohhh... she's cold hearted. I love it!! Talk about no strings attached. I agree.. no emotions sex is tricky in the morning when you sleep next to the person. Sex can be so impersonal with someone, but giving them that vulnerability when you're asleep and not in control of what goes on around you? Scary, scary. And very emotional.

Oh... crud. Wow, I never thought she'd have a past like that. Something like that's going to be tough to get over. I'm just glad you've taken the rape/cheating route without making it too cliche. Also, Harry's retaliation? Brilliant.

On a completely different note, Lordi's "Would You Love a Monsterman" is an awesome song. You've converted me.

Aha, now my answer has been explained with why Hermione will not let Lucius get close to her. Very interesting, somehow I don't think that will stop Lucius. Very determined that man. Can't wait to read what happens next.

What a bad man for listening in on the conversation! LOL! Nice work and please update soon.

Aw, poor Hermione going through so many failed relationships. Zach is an ass, and he totally deserved the punishment Harry gave him. And I am glad Lucius used his Slytherin deviousness to hear Hermione's secret. Now I wonder what he's going to do with that information.