rate_review Reviews

Whew! Sorry I haven't been reviewing; my laptop cord died last Wednesday, and the only computer I've had access to is my mom's. I don't think she'd appreciate knowing that I visit any sites like this.

Anyway! I really like the way you add personal touches not only to Rowling's characters, but also your own. The touch with the sheep is really cute.

Also, I've been thinking about Lucius's plan to convince Hermione to share cuddles and such with him, and might I give a word of caution? Tread very carefully in that area. I like the way he's showing that he's willing to back off if she wants it; I think it'd be best if you keep it that way. Speaking from the viewpoint of a person who has been receiving a lot of unwanted attention from a source who seems unwilling to take no for an answer, I can say (at least for myself) that not backing off when someone wants you to is not only a huge turnoff (unlike what happens in the movies), but also very stressful. Although, I think it would also be interesting if Lucius pushed Hermione too far and learned this lesson the hard way.

Of course, there is the fun of seeing a guy push and a girl eventually give in; that's why I still watch chick flicks.

That being said, I can't wait for your next chapter!

Chapters 16-17: I

Aww poor Lucius. Luckly Hermione is there. Please add more soon

Lol Poor Harry, he is a thick head sometimes, but Ginny loves just the same. Please add more soon

Aww that was so sweet. Please add more soon

Chapter 15: Poor Lucius. Flu is miserable stuff

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hi, I love this story. Did you mean "lord of the rings" instead of "lord of the wings"

ahh-- what a chapter. Sick Lucius, tender Hermione.

OMG poor Hermione. That's why she's that way with the whole 'Friends with benifits'. Lucius will be able to heal her heart and soul. Please add more soon