rate_review Reviews

Usually I'm not one to squeal over the antics of little children; I'm the one rolling her eyes before briskly walking in the other direction before I get sucked in. But that was FREAKING ADORABLE! I must've squee'ed at least six times during that chapter!

Interesting that Hermione seems to be on the verge of agreeing to Lucius's marriage proposal, without returning the "I love you." Can't wait to see how that turns out.

I can't remember, possibly because I just started visiting the site again, what the "charm" Hermione accuses Lucius of taking advantage of is.

Aww Utopia that was a sweet chapter! Please add more soon

*fighting the urge to babble indistinctly* These last chapters (minus the scary child abuse one) have been so adorable! I can't wait for more.

Yay new chapters!!! I really like this story and have been looking forward to new chapters. Keep up the great work and still looking forward to what will happen next.

Aww that's so sweet. Those poor kids. Please add more soon

Oh man! That alwyas the hardest part for any lw enforement. Having to work a child case. Be it: death, kidnapping, child slavery, or child auction. Great Job though. I hope that Lucius and Hermione give the people in the orphanage hell. Please add more soon.

yay for story...
yikes for situation...

Chapter 23: Whew, powerful chapter. Difficult to read, but extraordinary descriptions. I

I loved Lucius with the child and the bubbles.

I am really enjoying the story, you are an excellent writer but there were a few errors. It's animagi or animagus and it's really difficult and dangerous in the Harry Potter world for wizards to become them, they're usually born. Also it's a disillusionment charm and the Chudley Cannons. Keep it up though because I'm really enjoying the story.