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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
like it so far...more chapters please?
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed chapter three...very humourous, i had a smile on the whole time i read it. keep up the good work.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: What rubbish part? The part where you describe Lucius wearing a leather collar and nothing else? That
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Hermione sounds like a woman reminiscent of the Gibson Girl era, a Marilyn Monroe style, or as they say, an armful. Will our Lucius find her curvy body irresistible? Oh, I hope so. She is probably also going to be a handful! Maybe two handfuls if we readers are really lucky.
Anyway, this Hermione is no skinny runt. What is she going to think of her newest recruit? Let the arrests begin!
Anyway, this Hermione is no skinny runt. What is she going to think of her newest recruit? Let the arrests begin!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay i love this story!!!!!!!!!! now i am so going to hope that you update regularly! (crosses fingers) well i wonder how draco will take things? i am so looking forward to a nice and fun long story! :) more please!
ps love the uniforms ;)
ps love the uniforms ;)
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Not a surprise, Lucius is involved with the money already in his new group. It must be a trifle uh, trifling for him to work with such small sums. Funny
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start!!! I like this very much. By the way, if Lucius is chained to your bed, can I borrow him for a few hours? I swear I will pay top dollar.
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but otherwise very well-written. I kind of like the thought of a bad-ass Hermione. Also how her practicality overrules any romantic notions she might have; that seems more in character than her being a closet romantic. Keep it up!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow awesome story! Can I just say poor Lucius and Draco. I'm glad Lucius put Narcissa in her place once and for all. Now all you have to do is get Lucius and Hermione together. ANy way again, great story and chapter. Please add more soon
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Well, I guess you answered my question on what happened when Lucius was introduced to the Aurors. So Lucius is now much more muscled? Is that a personal body type you prefer? He and curvy Hermione should make quite a pair.
What a horrible surprise for Lucius to find at the Leaky Cauldron and in front of all his co-workers, too. Is there a reason Narcissa chose to sleep with this other Death Eater? I
What a horrible surprise for Lucius to find at the Leaky Cauldron and in front of all his co-workers, too. Is there a reason Narcissa chose to sleep with this other Death Eater? I