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schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all: I listened to the song and a few others by Lordi, and all I have to say is this: god damn Europe gets all the good bands. They get Nightwish, Lordi, Dragonforce, Rhapsody, etc., and what do we get? Simple Plan? Yeah, we have metal bands, but not as good as the Europeans have.

Secondly, the spell Draco and Jess used? Hot.

Thirdly, I really enjoy how creative you were incorporating the Animagus forms into costumes... although how any person could mistake a dragonfly's wings for those of a preying mantis is beyond me. So, since they can do partial Animagus forms, does that mean that Hermione could turn into a giant mantis if she wanted? That'd be pretty awesome.
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: Now THAT was hot! Lucius in a shower is soooo erotic and you wrote the scene deliciously. So who was the voice whispering at the end?

I was a little confused about just how Hermione, standing outside the door of the photography area, was able to give Lucius the potion and porno legilimens vision. Did she enter and give them to him?

I was surprised that Lucius would be willing to pose for the calendar at all, but his month should be enough to sell the calendar all by itself. Can I have an 8x10 glossy of Lucius
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 8.... REEEEEAALLLY wishing there was more than 5 stars on the rating scale for stories here!!!!!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy cow, go Hermione! Lucius as defiantly got a run for his money and in my opinion both Hermione and Lucius are a prefect match for one another. Please add more soon
person Citten
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can i have one? though am not in to the mistress ones usually i am more of the master types. well what now that was just wonderful espically on my month!!!! :) so more please ;)
person mariteri
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. It's rainy and cold here, but you wouldn't know it from my tempurature! LOL! Great work so far. The story is well written. My only complant so far is that you're not updating fast enough. Good luck and please update soon.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Now I want a calender! LOL. Do you think you could do something similar for Hermione? That would be so steamy hot.
person lazart
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mind sending me one of those calenders??? Please? Or just February will be fine! Love this story!! can't wait for more!
person chyara
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next installment!

what a great cliffie!

can you email me when you update?
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ghhhhk!

I was going to bitch and moan about how you posted so many chapters and then suddenly nothing, but that was more than worth the wait. Besides, I'm too busy choking on the foam in my mouth to do it properly.

That was probably the sexiest non-sex image I've had in my mind since the history of ever. I think I love you.

Also, most people couldn't manage to get away with adding so many Muggle practices in Lucius's life, but you manage to get away with it. Of course, with the world changing the way it is and Lucius's conscious (although forced) choice to join the Aurors, his personality would have to go through a few forced changes.