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for Forgive Those Who Trespass

by Lomonaaeren

person Dezra
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so stubborn in his convictions. Even if they are wrong.
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How funny we're at the end of your story and now the moderators decide to put you on the first latest updates page! fuckers...lol. Anyway, awesome, awesome ending..well not ending but climax. I'm so glad you didn't punk out and made Harry a part of the maze. That was crazy! I almost thought it would just end right there, but I'm so glad you brought him back, or rather Draco did. He didn't give up after 3 months and I"m sure he would have went on trying forever if Harry hadn't come back. By the way, Draco was cracking me the hell up in this chapter. I couldn't tell if he was being crazy or just being crazy funny...maybe a bit of both considering what he's been through. I hope Harry just learns to stop living in the future and start enjoying the present. Therapy is definitely in order for both of them....Thanks for torturing Richard like that...I just wish it could have went on for at least as long as Draco suffered. So, is this the end? or will we find out what becomes of these two? So so glad you wrote this, it's one of the most creative fan fics I've ever read. : )
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story. i dont remember reading anything like it before. this last chapter (28) about had me in tears. now i know harry has been through a lot but lets just hit him with a two by four and tell him to get with the program please. cant wait for your next chapter.
person LarienMiriel
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fweeeee! So good, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess we can say that what ever Draco want's he get's it ;-)
person misslala
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can say that I wasn't expecting that turn of events. I can't imagine either of them ever being sane again after all of that. Draco was pretty damn relentless on his path to bringing Harry back. I am eager to see what happens next. The key was so simple; a piece under their noses all that time. Heh, what a story. And I can't imagine where it will go next, or what sort of ending will come of it. Yes, they will undoubtedly try to be together, but what happens when the memories come back? Are they going to have an extremely violent relationship? That would seem incredibly cheap, so I don't imagine you doing that. They'd fight for normalcy together, I think, but you could surprise me. Interesting turn of events. How many chapters to go?
person Violet Eyes
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is amazing! Gruesome and graphic, but spectacularly well written. I can't wait to read more. Please add to your update mailing list. shado_phoenix@yahoo.com
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!! I need more! Please update soon! PLEASE! OH NO! Please say Harry has something up his sleeve!
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm sorry I have been gon a while but I come back and 3 chapters are waiting for me and boy did I love it! and boy doi love this story the last chapter wow it's all getting so good i don't ever want it to end...though its enevitable *sigh* well continue your wonderfull work!!!
person Dezra
schedule February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O God, this is so heartwrenching.