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Sooo need chapter 30!!!

Hurra for Harry. No he is having no issues NO!

Wow. Just wow. I had once thought that as soon as Harry and Draco had gotten together that that would be the end. HOWEVER, much to my delight, I realized that this story has just started. I am delighted that you didn't just give Draco and Harry a happy ending, because it would be too unrealistic. Harry still hasn't excepted his attraction to men, or more importantly, his desire for Draco. He is not ready to be physical with Draco. They both need time. Please update as soon you can!

OK Ron cracked me up in this chapter, he really would rather Harry move on without Draco, no matter the implications...Everytime Draco spoke in this chapter, I was like, yep, yep, uh-huh, now whatcha got to say to that Harry? lol. He is a bit obsessive though and I agree with Hermione, would probably kill anyone Harry dated at this point. They're gonna be in therapy for years! How are you gonna wrap up in 5 more chapters? I'm just glad their out and are least committed to doing it together, whatever happens after this is icing on the cake, unless they break up or something. Please don't go there... Oh and I had to tell ya that this chapter made me think of Lauryn Hill's Ex-Factor. I don't want to be corny, but I had to share these with you because I couldn't stop thinking of it while reading it:

It could all be so simple
But youd rather make it hard
Loving you is like a battle
And we both end up with scars
Tell me, who I have to be
To get some reciprocity see
No one loves you more than me
And no one ever will

Is this just a silly game
That forces you to act this way
Forces you to scream my name
Then pretend that you cant stay
Tell me, who I have to be
To get some reciprocity see
No one loves you more than me
And no one ever will


No matter how I think we grow
You always seem to let me know
It aint workin
And when I try to walk away
You'd hurt yourself to make me stay
This is crazy

I keep letting you back in
How can I explain myself
As painful as this thing has been
I just cant be with no one else
See I know what we got to do
You let go and Ill let go too
cause no ones hurt me more than you
And no one ever will

Care for me, care for me
I know you care for me

There for me, there for me
Said you'd be there for me

Cry for me, cry for me
You said you'd die for me

Give to me, give to me
Why wont you live for me

Thanks for adding me to the email list. This story is amazing. If it was a book, I'd buy the hardcover collectors' edition

Sooo need chapter 29!!!

Oh. So is it almost done? I can't believe asking was the only thing...Draco...Harry. My mind is so overloaded right now. But there's this vague pleasant sensation running around, so even if my brain did shortcircuit from the chapter, it was good. XD Very good. And Harry is no longer the maze! YES! Aw. Draco was just so sweet in a scary kind of way. I like.

OH MY GOD YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! FUCK YES!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! (Happy Valentine's Day!) Thank you SO MUCH for getting Harry out of that goddamn maze!!! AND THANK YOU FOR TORTURING RICHARD!!!!!! Gruesome and absolutely sweet revenge...quite possibly not *enough* torturing, but if I actually stop and think about what happened to him with the gut wound and the intestines, then I feel better. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET, YOU BASTARD!!!!! NO ONE MESSES WITH MY DRACO!!!!!

The description of Harry becoming and being the maze are just fucking brilliant. Really, really amazing. (I don't know how you do it) and then I wanted to cry when Draco (back to *himself* and even improved!) refused to give up!!!! I LOVED the interaction between Hermione and Draco...though I have to be a little curious as to where Ron is at this point...but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough!!!

I totally understand Harry's POV and musings here. About the suffering and what people expect of him! LOVED it!

I was a little confused at first at how Harry could 'unsacrifice' himself while Draco couldn't, but I think I understand that it was the issue of 'willingness' or not...and the motive behind that willingness...right?

If it was a question of the needs of the person for whom the sacrifice was made...does that translate to Draco's 'sacrifice' at all? Since it seemed he sacrificed for the love and safety of his family, would THEY have been able to call him back (the way Draco did to Harry)? Or no because of the circumstances that forced Draco's 'willingness'?

I SO nearly cried when Draco was telling Harry about how he needed him! And I realized that even though I wanted Richard tortured, Draco needs Harry more than revenge!

I think I understand Harry's frame of mind (so to speak) when he seemed irritated at Draco for asking for MORE (when Harry had already sacrificed everything for him...or so he thought) and I was hoping that that meant Harry wouldn't go back to being the maze (even if he thought he would at the time).

And OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVED the way Draco spoke to him in St. Mungo's!!!! So totally Draco!!!! Caring and loving in his way that is so fucked up and twisted that it made me cry!!! Seriously, I was crying and laughing at the same time because they have SUCH a fucked up kind of love, and I WANT THAT!!!! Oh my god!!! "Think about trying to leave me" Oh my poor paranoid absolutely fucking wonderfully misguided Draco!!! Harry is never going to leave you! Just like you're never going to leave Harry! I LOVE IT!!!

*frustrated huff* Harry STILL doesn't get it? What will it take for him to understand that he IS the best and only thing for Draco? Stupid fucking thick Gryffindor! *lightbulb* Draco's gonna beat him, isn't he? *hopeful* And I mean 'beat' in a good way (you know, BDSM, pain/pleasure, 'sex until their voices are gone from screaming and they can't move afterwards for two days because they fucked each other's brains out' kind of way) Harry's pretty darn thick...it might take several sessions of that *wink*

*raises hand* I volunteer to be their therapist! Degree? What degree? No, I don't have a degree...you need a degree to give advice on sex? LOL Oh, I meant I'd be their sex therapist and recommend long hours of beatings in order for Harry to understand...

But in all seriousness, I am so glad that you mentioned therapy because it's realistic and it's one of those little details that just makes the story make so much more sense!!!

And Draco ALWAYS gets what he wants...*wink* That's one of the things that make him Draco!!! I love you so much for writing this story!!! FUCKING AWESOME

It always amazes me just how brilliant your work is. Truly. I was hanging on every letter this whole chapter. I loved it. How everything was seen through Hary's eyes...or spirit. I feel for them...they might never be sane again but at least they are together.

well that was eventfull ah draco yelling and thretening harry with the pain of taking out a lung and feeding it to him thats love there. can't wait till harry is better to get his whole spin on it what it must have been to be a room the maze itself...did anyone drink the sap? oh i had wished a wose fat for richerd TT.TT well wonder how there recovery will go and then the question of there relashonship. have you ever thought of righting a book...bet it'd be good lol don't mind me this is the first time i'm reading your story when it's light outside lol