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This is the creepiest thing you've ever written, and I'm totally messmorized! Update soon please :)

OMG..this story is incredible so far. I am completely disturbed by this chapter though. Man it's like the magical version of ww2, at least in torture all in the name of progress and discovery. It's freaky that it is a sanctioned government goings on that of course no one knows is going on...or do they? I look forward to more of it, despite its horror.

Oh my this is good!

Oh wow...you're another quick updater..good. I didn't expect to see Ch. 2 for awhile and was pleasantly surprised to see you're still freaking us out. My poor Draco can't even talk either, has nubs and missing ribs...damn. I can only hope that Ron and Hermione are more fortunate. A human chain...ingenius, you're a bit scary. I love it. I like the mood you've set, it's hanging over this fic heavy like a curtain and promises for only more terror to come. Keep it coming : )

Oh my fucking god!!!! What the FUCKING HELL happened to Draco???? I have to know!!! I torture him in my stories too...poor thing. But THIS...THIS is sheer fucking dark-ass evil brilliance, and I cannot WAIT to see what happens!!!

This reminds me of Lucilla Darkate's "Promethean Fire" (I think that was the name of the story) in that it is really dark and twisted and you're not afraid to go there. I'm fucked up enough in the head to enjoy reading it, and that makes me glad that you're writing it.

I hope that everything is going okay in your real life and that this isn't an exercise to relieve stress or something. (I mean, I know that when I'm angry, Draco gets hurt a lot more...) So I hope this isn't a reflection on a dark turn your life has taken...but this is a fucking great story, and I want more!!!

OH I forgot to ask....WHO WAS THE HUMAN CHAIN?????? Who was it??? Harry obviously recognized them, right??? Did Draco??? WHO WAS IT????? *howls*

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Oh my god. The person who was literally made into a chain WAS dead, right??? RIGHT??? (Oh, god, it wasn't Fred's body, was it??? *whimper*) Harry went closer to make sure that the person was ACTUALLY dead now...but you didn't SAY that they were REALLY dead...so they ARE dead, right??? WHO WAS IT????

And WTF is in the room with them now??? The claws, the sniffing...a dog, perhaps? Fluffy? A werewolf? (Greyback??? He would definitely be a sick bastard...but I can't see him as being super smart and torturing people...he just likes to bite...)

Claws and clicking makes me think of that monster from Dean Koontz's "The Watchers"...the Outsider...fucking creepy as hell, that thing was. I LOVE THIS HORROR STORY!!!!! (I can't believe you're telling us a horror story right before Christmas!!! It's like...anally raping a bunny rabbit and then giving it to your kid as a birthday present...)

Wow, that was fucked up...

Oh, wow! Talk about a tense moment! This is so very intriguing already. I am eager to know what's going on! Fantastic start, love.

Wow. You are very creative with things in this! Incredible. I feel so bad for Draco. I hope that he isn't in on whatever is going on. That would truly be horrifying. The body braided, please tell me that wasn't Hermione. Although, I think Harry might have known if it had been. I can't wait to see what you have planned for us readers! There are so many little things and big things that could possibly come from this. I am thoroughly intrigued and can't wait to see more soon!

wowowo, harder than your other stories. very scary... i think i like it.
But how can Draco fall in love? After a year of suffering falling in love with with harry isn

OMG!!! Who is it? What is coming towards them? I sooo need chapter 3!