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for Forgive Those Who Trespass

by Lomonaaeren

person Rousy_P
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic fic! And I love the ending. Though I don't review too much, I have enjoyed each chapter. Thanks for that! I'll be waiting for your new fic :)
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. I've loved all your other stories, but this one was just a completely different approach to a story of finding someone and needing to love them. Amazing :)
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting until the last chapter to comment as I wanted to see exactly how many long chapters it took for Harry to finally give in, which by the way it ended, he didn't fully yet again. He still had doubts when he woke up, thinking he was still doing something wrong, and just doing it because Draco liked it. Or, that's the way I took it. He still is trying to deny it even though he got his rocks off the night before the same as Draco.

To me, I think the story could have stood another chapter with Harry finally giving in and accepting he was gay instead of mearly thinking about doing it. I think most definately, you should have shown that. The way it is left, If I were in Draco's shoes, I'd eventually find someone else who would gladly enjoy having sex. Even if he still tried to stay with Harry. Most likely, the threat of someone else may have been enough of a kick in Harrys' arse to make him admit he liked it and was gay.

Because of this, it made me not like this story as well as your others. It seemed it was like the old saying, "beating a dead horse", where Harry can't admit he's gay over, and over, and over.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story and I like the ending :-)
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a really great story. its amazing how you blended gory suspense and tender love into this story. u always write superb stories, no matter how long or short they are. cant wait for the next story!
person Lacegag
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I'm so glad I stayed until the end, because it was just fabulous! I've read all your stories up to date and I've enjoyed every one! I can safely say that you are my favorite fan fiction writer. You make me fall in love with the characters all over again. And when I say in love, I'm mean completely, deeply, and passionately in love. I wait with bated breath for another one of your works of literary excellence.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I remember when you first posted this fic. It was love at first sight for me. Thank you so much for this! Ir was one of the best fics I've ever read.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this fantastic story!
person misslala
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. These last two chapters had me an absolute puddle of happiness and sadness all at once. The joy, pain - all of it - had me completely engrossed. I adore that you kept the themes solid throughout, keeping Harry afraid, but willing to take steps because it was Draco, and he trusted Draco. This story, however sad it began, ended with its own happiness, and, I, like thrnbrooke, am so sorry to see it end. It's been an incredible read.

I hate that the second-to-last chapter seemed to go by so quickly, but I understand why it had to be done, and I absolutely adore the ending. I think it fit well under the circumstances, and that two men, broken, can help put one another back together without being completely dependant on the other any more. Bravo. I hope you are proud of this, it's a wonderful piece. :) Thanks for sharing, hon. Looking forward to the next tale.
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sitting here crying...this chapter was so great. Thank you for writing this story. I love the way you ended it at the start of their exploration of sexual intimacy. That's perfect. I also liked that you revealed who ratted to Skeeter and I'm glad Draco got to spit in the little punk's face. I do hope Harry will learn to control his temper though, Argwal is right, it will only hurt Draco more in the end, but damn that was funny what he did to that guy..lol. It's good that Narcissa is accepting of their relationship, and her threat to Harry was so Malfoy, lol. I'm so glad Ron has seen the light and is ready to talk about marriage with Hermione. This story is so much about transitions and growth and you've done a great job of mirroring it in every aspect from the physical, emotional, to the interpersonal. One of the best fan fics I've ever read. Cheers to you and now I'm off to read the epilogue and get some tissues..lol.