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This is horrifiingly addictive. You should update like tomorrow, to help me in my poor curious suffering.

You know... I think I've been waiting for this story for about a year... thank you for knowing what to do with this idea. :-)

Damn! I was on edge for real. I almost didn't think they would make it out of that room for a few days or so. This is a real nail biter. Crawling over bodies? Nice! You're kinda a sick fuck and I love it. I was wondering how Harry would find Draco even remotely attractive with him being deformed and all, but I guess love isn't skin deep...poor thing. I like the slow build up, it's realistic for this tale. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into this...the whole communication vial thing is another language with its it's own special coding system. Very creative. I hope I don't start getting nightmares off this fic....it wouldn't matter though, just like a scary movie, I'd still have to peek and see what's going to happen next.

Utterly brilliant writing here!
I love how dark you've made this, it's very intriguing. Your imagery is intense. One of my favourite parts is when (third chapter) Draco "opened his arms as if he had no expectation of being refused." Aw...! Perfect for the spoiled brat he once was! Hahaha. It also rang as if it were showing a Hope and Belief that helped carry him this whole time. (Maybe hope for and belief in Harry?) It was a very sweet and endearing moment. And very true to character!
Eagerly awaiting the fourth chapter!

(In horror) I still can't get over the imagination of bodies, hands, legs. And some of them were still alive, right? My god. Meaning they were just waiting for their time to come? Who are those people? Wizards and witches? Muggles? Those who worked at the department? Or will we find out soon enough in later chapters? It's horrible. What they did to them. This usually happens in a very very extremely terrible nightmare. Wah x.x!!!

Ohhh Draco (cries)! His condition was just so sad. I hope he'll get better soon (almost impossible, but hey, Harry's with him! One can wish, right?). I mean, how he was desperate for some human contacts with Harry and all. But I'm really not surprised. Can't wait for their feelings (based on trust, you say?) to grow. Yeah, I suppose with the situation they're in, the trust they'll be building for each other must be important, especially to just keep going and survive.

Will this story be longer than your other stories? Great chapter as usual. Can't wait for the next one! :)

I really like this story, it's really original and I hope you continue to write it. ^__^

Soooo need chapter 4!

Awww..man! But I wanna know! Oh well. Very gross...landing on a pile of corpses! and poor Draco. He is so needy! I hate what they've done to him! Why him!? And what were they doing? Besides the immortality thing...there's something else going on that you haven't told yet! Please update soon!

eagerly awaiting your update,
Lilith

although i dont generally read such graphic torture, you write it in such a sophisticated way that im ok reading it, like a horror movie that uses suspense to thrill rather than blood and gore. chapter 3 was awesome. was malfoy gay or bisexual before the torture, or, like harry, was only asking for comfort bcuz of the extraordinary circumstances? keep up the good work :D

Oh my god.. that was horrible. (The scene, I mean!).. my god. Just .. no way! OUCH. I really wonder how Draco endured all that. I'm surprised that he's still even alive. Whoever responsible for all those torturing and all.. just holy crap. So inhuman. And the chain. The damned chain! I was trying not to shriek in horror. I could practically picture the dead body in my head. My god. It's so.. disturbing. Wahhhhhhhhhhh. I'm so so so glad Harry found Draco. I'm sure Draco's hella glad himself.. who would want to stay alone in such situation? To think that he's been there for almost a year.. just shit. You're extremely good in describing the scenes, Lomonaaeren. You can write awfully well in all genres, from comedy to romance to angst and horror. Just wow! Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder what they'll come across with next.. and what was that all about towards the end of the chapter? So freaky @__@!