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The "yawning pit of betrayal" was an incredible image, I had to stop reading and close my eyes and think about that one. Great phrasing, unique and very descriptive!
And the "Idiot Gryffindor" was a *great* addition to the sarcasm facet hahahahahahaha! I knew there'd be insults in there somewhere!
Very realistic how Harry wanted to make Draco go back, but now Draco is the only one who has the maze figured out, so Harry has to accept him and continue together. It does not feel forced at all, how they have to stay together through this. But aw...I sure hope Harry can trust Draco again relatively soon!

I still don't understand why Malfoy participated in those things at the first place, but I sure do know that he regretted it, and that he didn't know it was going to be THAT bad. I hope Harry will accept that in the future. I can understand if Harry can't trust Draco for the mean time. I feel so sorry for Draco though.. Great chapter as usual.. I really almost cried, the part when Draco broke down. So sad T__T

LMAO, the fact the communication sphere has a whole facet for sarcasm is the greatest thing ever! That is *so* Draco. I can just see them setting that part up...Harry being forced to make it record various scathing retorts suitable for many situations hahahaha! Loving this story

Gah! It's so obvious that Draco would be involved in some way. Hrm. That definately puts a major twist in things. Is this just a way to lure Harry down there? That worries me. I'm not too worried about the content - I've made it through some pretty intense stuff because of the author, and as I told them, I trust me to take me on your journey, just making me enjoy every step. I like the intimacy that they are easing into. I think it's also good that Harry sees Draco as needy, in a way. This is so brilliant. :) Very nice. I can't wait to see whatever horrors you come up with. So far we've had some pretty tense things, but I can only hope they continue to grow. We, the readers, need that tension, and you build it so well, I do not believe we will be disappointed. Cheers! Can't wait to see more.

THAT LITTLE SHIT KNOWS the way out. damn him. nice chap!

Hrm... I don't have any theories, and that's probably for the best. You're doing an excellent job of keeping the tension high, so I imagine that when it all comes crashing down that this should be interesting. Ah, and he's found the sarcastic phrases. LOL Brilliant. looking forward to more! haha

Oh no..Draco help create this problem...that makes him less sympathetic I reckon...but I do like the small touches and comfort Harry is trying to give him to get through this. I see the beginnings of attraction and its kinda bittersweet considering the context. He must have really did something f*cked up or the Ministry betrayed him for them to turn on him like a dog like that. that chapter wasn't so dark though. Whatever you dish out we can handle it..keep it coming!

holy shit!

I just started reading this it's kinda scary but very good mystery. Thats for shareing

Wow. I can see Draco wanted comfort, and Harry's been doing that already, almost without thought. Even when he's stopped to think about his actions, it's obvious that he does care, even if he hates to admit it to himself. I think it's interesting that he's ashamed of himself. That definately adds an interesting twist to the entire "getting closer" idea. I can't wait for more. I have to say your descriptions are incredible. After reading your livejournal post about your writing process, it brings a whole new angle to the way I read your work. :) It's so very fascinating.

Thanks for sharing!