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for Forgive Those Who Trespass

by Lomonaaeren

schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 8! Eight? There are more of them? Do all of them have Draco's memories? Why his?
person js
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the unique plot line and the confusion that Harry's feeling right now. I'd love to find out more of what Draco's thinking and feeling through all of this.
person Myra
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. That was so sad.. I feel like crying. BAHHHHHH. Poooooor Dracoooooooo. Noooo x_x!! I'd faint earlier than Draco did if I was Harry, watching the horrid scene *_*.. those people.. grrrrrrr. I despise them so so much. Draco was tricked into it, knew it! I'm so glad he didn't join them knowing what they're really doing behind the curtains. And I have no idea why, but when Harry said "I'm so, so sorry", I felt so horrible @___@.. gooooood chapter. Can't wait for the next one <3
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol..you had me literally cringing with my knees drawn up and flinching after every word when I read the section about Draco's mutilation. That was horrific and brilliantly detailed. Harry can't push him away now! What I really wanna know is though if Draco whispered thank you or something else in Harry's ear. I'm a bit confused about the 8 pensieves...so they're using Draco's bones to follow the research he did, where exactly are they going, and why does this all seem like a elaborate trap? I'm very worried for them both...
person misslala
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. Those little bone creatures are freaky! This is so tense, and I love it! :D Can't wait for more, hon.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7! A wooden block for a foot might not be a bad thing. Could use it for a weapon.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I mean Wow. this is got to be one of the most creative stories I've read in fan fiction. The stuff you're coming up with is really wild...seriously. That last chapter was horrific. I can just picture things sucking Harry's foot bones from his skin....it's crazy that he's becoming more attracted to Draco through all of this, but then again, in intense situations things come out of people they weren't expecting. I feel so sorry for Draco but if he knew they were killing folks then not so much : ) I feel a first kiss coming on? should be interesting, just hope they both live that long....keep it coming!
person graballz
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!! TWICE!!!!! I read that Draco HELPED in creating the problem with the DoM...but that just can't be right!!! Or else something went horribly, horribly wrong, because Draco wouldn't sacrifice himself to be tortured for a year or more!!!! (Right?)

HARRY, NO, DON'T FEEL BETRAYED!!!! I'm sure there is a good explanation for that!!!! *whimper* Draco, what is going on in that fucked-up blonde head of yours?

Lom, I LOVE YOU FOREVER for writing this story!!!! Thank you for "going there" with "pretty damn dark and gory". I love it, even if it squicks me out...and I'll keep reading (as long as it's okay with you that I squeal in my reviews) But I hope you know that I still love it even though it's disturbing content! Or maybe I love it BECAUSE it's disturbing...

Anyway...I'm going to read your second update and then leave you another review, since you were so kind as to post TWO chapters today!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 6!
person graballz
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD *sob* I'm so glad Harry isn't made of 'tough enough stuff' to watch Draco suffer!!!!!!!! I REALLY want to know what happened to Draco, so I'll keep reading!!!

I'm guessing that Draco solved the puzzle with the little balls wrong, and these are the horrible, dastardly consequences? The maze...but the horrors were all inflicted by the Unspeakables? Damn...

I'm going to try not to guess, since I'm no good at it. I just love this story and now cant' WAIT for your next update!!!!

I finish every chapter of yours and sit in silence for a few seconds, and then think "GOD DAMN that was good!" and then I usually want to gasp and yell and scream for the way you left it (or something)

but I'm hoping that Draco will find some way to redeem himself in Harry's eyes and that Harry will regain his trust. (Draco IS worthy of Harry's trust, right???)

augh! Update soon! (and thank you thank you THANK YOU for updating twice today!)