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Hmm...this is getting really mind boggling. Harry is in quite a situation. Now i'm not so sure if I trust Draco either..lol. You're doing a great job at building suspense and doubt about whats really going on. That was one of the most gripping chapters yet...did I say we could handle it previously? Maybe I spoke too soon..lol. :::shudder:::

Great chapter :) I'm definitely glad I strayed from my usual smut and fluff!

So was the whole point to get Harry down there in order to complete the full ritual? If so, damn they knoew Harry too well now. Wow. This keeps getitng intense. I am worried about how their relationship is going to end up working out should they ever get out of there. I can't even begin to guess what you have up your sleeve with this! LOL It's very intense. So Draco wasn't willing - they used the Imperius curse on him - but that still leaves the question of whether Draco meant to do it all. If Draco is the maze, how do they reverse it? There has to be a way. They can't be the only living people in the maze. Now I'm wondering if Kingsley knew about this, too. Why else would he completely ignore Harry's request to send someone after Draco. Shit, this is really good. It's scary in all the right ways, full of suspense and mystery. I can't way to see how this madness concludes. Especially since they end up with somewhat of a pre-slash relationship. God, keep the chapters coming! :D This is brilliant.

Sooo need chapter 9!

This is extremely different than your other writing, and in some twisted way, I really like it. I'm definitely squirming while I read it, but sometimes I think that's half the fun of reading.

Great job so far!

omg! why was I picturing Children of the Damned in this chapter...that's too many Draco for one person to handle. Now everything is clear...what a clever plot you have going on here. How are they gonna get away, they're out numbered. On another note, I'm glad Harry has decided to trust Draco...can you give these boys a little break, some sleep, some nookie time? lol. Loved this scene, it was really creepy...

Amazing chapter once again. Oh poor Draco! He just has to be saved! I love the intricitness of this plot, this story is just absolutely stunning so far.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow. Those snakes were something else! I think the basis of their relationship could be quite interesting in the end. Here is Harry trying to comfort Draco, but stay strong for himself through this trial and then there's the ever growing phsyical pieces that they are experiencing as well. I feel bad for both of them through this. I'm hoping that Draco feel repentant for what he's done. I'm wondering what the purpose of the Pensives are. Is it a way to remind Draco of what he did, or a means to tempt someone like Harry into using whatever power hides at the end of the maze? Is this a story where Draco really doesn't care, but he's using Harry, only allowing snippets of memory to leak through for his own purposes? I notice that Harry hasn't noticed whether Draco is still Marked or not... I have lots of theories swimming around with this one. :D Keep up the great work, hon. This is incredible.

man where do you come up with these ideas? chapter 6 gave me the willies! Almost didn't want to go to bed. my hands got all sweaty and my stomach got all queazy. I So cannot wait for an update!

This is fantastic! It's getting better and betterbwith each chapter! I love horror and gore. So, I'm thoroughly enjoying this! I also can't wait to find out what else went on down in the DOM and where Ron and Hermione are too.