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Ch. 13 I was afraid that something had happened to Harry's friends. I was actually hoping for death, seeing what happened to the other victims. But now I'm wondering if Ron's head is somehow alive, even detached from the rest of him, like the limbs of that woman in the magical fire Harry saw in the Pensieve. No, if he were alive, then he would have said something when he heard Harry...unless his voice were taken like Malfoy's and that's not likely at this point.

ron's head. creepy.... will skelegro help with draco's bone problem?

oh shit ron can't be dead!!!!! i hate to think what happened to hermoine!!

*hand over mouth* oh my god....is Ron dead? I'm like in shock....*lips tremble* Oh jesus....this is getting so scary and horrific. I want to know how Draco lost his voice...and what exactly their fates will be along with Ron and Hermione's and the unspeakables...update soon!

-nearly faints- Om my od, is that horrific. Nothing like finding your best mate's severed head, eh? But does this mean he's dead and there's no way to get him back? Or would answering that reveil to much? And oh man, what about Hermione? I can only imagine...Well, actually I can't. So, far I haven't been able to predict anything. You certainly know how to throw us for a loop! Also, if I may inquire, how long do you expect this story to be? Will it range in length like your other stories? I love reading your long story fics. You're storylines and plots are always so wonderful and well put together. Though I ,of course, love your oneshots too. You are one damn good writer. Ever thought of writing a book? I believe you would go far.

Ch. 12 Boy, that was the scariest thing of all. Those portraits have got to be the most incomprehensible thing of the HP universe and I'm still not quite sure what they are. They move and they hear and talk but they're not alive. Yet they somehow react like living things. It's very spooky.

Simple solutions to difficult problems. Of course, someone like Harry could figure it out. ;D

That scene were he fell to the floor was actually rather funny. :D It was providential that nothing attacked while he was sleeping. But I suppose Draco would have awakened him if anything had. Phew!

So much darker than your other fics but I love those kinds more! This has me thinking you have become one of my favorite writers. I usually enjoy more "action in the bedroom" kind of fics but with the plot you have and the way you portray Harry and Draco make me read all of your fics. They are fantastic! Thanks for the escape from reality!

-Nus

do you think the injuries sustained by harry and draco can be healed? bcuz sumtimes injuries directly from dark curses cannot heal, so if their injuries inflicted by the maze is by dark magic, which is a strong possibility, they might not heal. eek! love the storys progression, btw. keep it up :D

also, in a a potion named desire, is that pre-slash like this one, n we have to wait for slash in the 2nd or 3rd part of series, or will we see slash at the end of that story? sry if i dont remember what u said abt the story. love that one too. love all your stories actually. you are an amazing author :D

Wow. That was nuts. Your imagination still never ceases to amaze me...sucking out memories...living portraits with figures that start walking out of them? that made me think of "The Ring" when that girl started walking out of the TV...scared the crap outta me. I'm surprised Harry didn't freak out, but what else could he do? lol. What's really amazing to me is how you're building intimacy and attraction throughout this whole fiasco. It feels real and it's even a little sexy and that's hard to pull off when folks don't have fingers, no voice, and are in constant peril. Happy New Years to you : )

What an interesting spell! Hrm, those portraits were pretty scary. I'd hate to be in a room with them. lol Ah, the pizza has just arrived, so I must go, but this is another great update. :D Interesting that Draco is doing a lot of the saving down there. :D I'm sure in more ways than one.

Happy New Year!