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What did he do now? And how can he believe that someone mad of skin and liquid would be sane?! Draco should realy control him better.

Ch. 16 Harry, you silly mush-headed fool. However, if he weren't so soft-hearted, he wouldn't be helping Draco. So the Slytherin can thank his lucky stars. Turning those creatures into rats was funny although I wouldn't have given them food. Rats are very resourceful creatures when it comes to scrounging up grub. They even eat other rats. That's right; let 'em fight it out!

Hey, I just wanted to say that I love your story and was wondering if I could get on your mailing list. I don't want to be a bother or anything but you can get me at slytherinsxe@att.net or AirForceAJ@aol.com. Your story is the most original I have ever read and I check almost every week for you to update. I was happy to see two chapters on my 20th b-day, so yay!! :D

I love how Harry apparently has the time to obsess over Draco's sexuality. hahahahaha! Very creepy chapter. the liquefied bodies were sick. And to top it all off harry says the wrong thing...oh well. Excellent chapter!

Worst room yet!! Your imagination is SICK! So there are still Unspeakables walking around in there searching for them? or are they all trapped in their own special room in the maze? Where's Ron and Hermione dammit..lol. OK, and why was I yelling at Harry when he went on that plank. Screw Pearl! But what a horrifying image you painted right before everything went to light...whatever that means, I hope Harry didn't jack up and get himself in something that's gonna wind up getting Draco or him killed. You're not gonna kill anyone are you?

what extreme torture Draco endured...to have your ribs stolen from you over and over again while you're conscious? He's gonna be a basket case even if they do get out OK. lol@Harry thinking about Draco being bent more than anything else. at least there's a bright spot in there...you think Draco knows Harry's conflicted about his sexuality? I guess now isn't an appropiate time for either to explore that...I'm still not sure what Harry's plan is, thought I knew maybe, but now I really don't know. But I do hope it works. I like how you showed the Pearl lady, while a despicable character, isn't one dimensional. The whole family/cancer motive brings a little humanity to her character. I guess no one is purely evil, except Richard, and I hope he gets his!

Oh my. What an asshole. Telling Draco Narcissa was dead. And taking out his ribs...*shudders* sick. Good chapter. Update soon!

Everything in the story is so horrible but I couldn't stop reading. please update soon :-)

Ch. 15 I didn't realize that Malfoy's ribs might have been taken more than once. Of course, I was starting to wonder how there could be so many of them in the different Pensieves. But I have a limited idea of human anatomy so I thought I was miscounting. Brrr...

Pearl's motives are commendable even if her attitude (the means justifying the ends) are not. However, I thought it was revealing how Malfoy says in one moment that Snape thought him that his ideas of being privileged and special were petty then in the next, he thinks Pearl wants to make herself a Pureblood...as if all Muggleborns regret the fact that they're not. Didn't he learn anything from Hermione Granger?

Thanks and i cant wait for another chapter!

this is got to be the best story i have read in a lon~g time.