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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, creepy but good, but creepy.
i have no idea where your going with this
but i still want more. can't wait for your
next chapter.
serpensortia
i have no idea where your going with this
but i still want more. can't wait for your
next chapter.
serpensortia
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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..how heartbreaking...Draco has to watch himself do all of those awful things and jesus, skinning someone??? Harry needs to keep it real with him. I'm so sad for Draco for so many reasons now, and Harry's at the top of that list. He needs to get over himself and stop thinking so hard.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy sh@#$*&%#($*&#!
wow this story has even my messed up mind
is going for a loop, and i love it.
i can't wait for the next installment.
i'd love to be added to that list of emails
if you would be so kind at serpensortia06@gmail.com
and don't rush it, rushing these kinds of stories
always seems to take some of the life from them, and
this is one of the better ones that i have ever read.
serpen
wow this story has even my messed up mind
is going for a loop, and i love it.
i can't wait for the next installment.
i'd love to be added to that list of emails
if you would be so kind at serpensortia06@gmail.com
and don't rush it, rushing these kinds of stories
always seems to take some of the life from them, and
this is one of the better ones that i have ever read.
serpen
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i kinda guessed eh verry good chapter ^^ the spell was verry imanative and harry is stupid poor stupid harry even imainary ron thought so! wonder how draco feels. plan on doing a chapter in draco's pov?
awating your next chapter
awating your next chapter
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Harry broke Draco's heart...the jerk! Well.... guess he feels that its inappropriate...and I suppose it is what with the okace they are in and what happening around them O.o nice chapter! update soon!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for both Harry and Draco in this. Harry is so obviously struggling with his attraction and trying to be a gentleman about things, but I don't think Draco would have attempted that had he not seen something else within those combined moments. It makes me wish you were including a bit of Draco's POV in this so that we could see what he was thinking/feeling other than the subtle glimpses through Harry. We all know that he is good at mis-interpreting things. :P Another fantastic, although, heartwrenching chapter. It would be nice to see Harry not care that he's gay - I wonder what it will take for him to see there's nothing wrong with his desires for Draco. Well... if this is even the real Draco. LOL But, you haven't labelled this a tragedy, so I think it's safe to assume that it will all become clear before long.
Another room of memories to come, something painful. I want to think that a memory of 6th year will come along before long, something that Harry can also regret. All of Draco's pain hasn't come from that maze alone; there's so much more you have left to explore, and I'm so very eager to see it in action!
Another room of memories to come, something painful. I want to think that a memory of 6th year will come along before long, something that Harry can also regret. All of Draco's pain hasn't come from that maze alone; there's so much more you have left to explore, and I'm so very eager to see it in action!
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Most beautiful and powerful chapter yet. The whole description of Harry as light and connecting to the center that was Draco was really really beautiful, intimate, and just kickass writing! I could read that part over and over. Just glad he didn't die, I wasn't sure where you were going when you left it like that. So sad Harry isn't comfortable enough in his skin to give Draco what he and Draco both want and need right now. Just want to shake Harry throughout this story but it's also very real, the insecurity, doubt, and fear about who he is and his fears for taking advantage of Draco are just sweet, although I think he's just using that as an excuse. I hope he finds some courage soon and faces it so they can start really exploring each other.
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your welcome
I like the slow progress on harry and dracos relashon ship, its there but not...wondering if harry would give up 'mione and ron for draco? and why did the robed people show up then? I also wonder if anyone elce is in the maze. when will poor draco get his voice back? u don't have to awnser but it would be nice. ^^
can't wait for more!
I like the slow progress on harry and dracos relashon ship, its there but not...wondering if harry would give up 'mione and ron for draco? and why did the robed people show up then? I also wonder if anyone elce is in the maze. when will poor draco get his voice back? u don't have to awnser but it would be nice. ^^
can't wait for more!
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January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I'm so happy that you updated. So mean, though for the cliffie! This story is SOOOO horrifying, if it was a movie I don't think I'd be able to watch it without having nightmares for months(I'm a sissy, I know), but I LOVE this story and all the others I've been bouncing on.
Write ON!
Write ON!
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry is so daft sometimes! LOL God, that room sounds horrible. I could see it so clearly in my mind's eye, and that has to be the worst part of it. I wonder what the spell that Harry cast actually does. If it wasn't the one that Draco had meant for him to use. Whew. Getting tense there. How the hell are they going to get out of this place? Him Transfiguring the Unspeakables into rats was priceless, though. I have to admit that was quite original. :D I can't wait for more! I'm on the edge of my seat.