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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for adding me! Right now I can only wonder 1) what is that shadow, obvious to us readers it's /something/. 2) has Draco always been obsessed with Potter, even out of school? and 3) did Ron and Hermione really say those things? Hm. I suspect 2 and 3 are yes, and that 1 is something nasty. But I'm happy for the update!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What was hiding in the shadows? I sooo need chapter 21!!!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First, please add me to the update list. Second, I read this story in two sittings /only/ because I had to go to school. Third, this is a really good story. It's obvious you've time and effort into this, and the characters (their personalities, natures, however you say it) are complex and layered (thank god! and not static but dynamic, too). I don't usually read anything horror-ish but I've read some of your oneshots (and fell in love), and so gave this a try. I'm glad I did! Unfortunately there's so much I want to say/comment on, but I can't remember it all! Just, please keep writing and updating (you have talent), and it's been marvelous and amazing (even when I was squirming at the squickiness) and I wish Harry wasn't so delusional (but it wouldn't be as fun if he weren't) and Draco has such cute(!) moments throughout the story. And, that was a really bad run on sentence, but maybe it will help to effectively convey my emotions. And, just because it popped into my head, you really don't need a beta. Your writing is skilled enough, and I don't remember any real glaring grammatical or spelling-related problems. Mmm...and any other compliments/comments I had while reading have Apparated from my brain (sorry!). So a general, wow this is amazing please update and I will loyally keep reviewing! will have to do. ^____^ \/
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January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely crude, and disgustingly scary, and.......I LOVE it. I have never read a fanfic so in graved with scenes of horror and actually wanted to continue reading. Once again you have pulled a mind blowing story from your muse bag. I NEED more. I crave to know what has happened to R&H. What other secrets wil be revealed by the maze. As always, I am hoping for a happy ending. Draco and Harry deserve at least that after everything they have been through.
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 19 I'm glad that Harry was able to articulate his feelings. Draco voiced a few of the objections that I've had to Harry's chosen outlook about his sexual orientation. But Harry is also thinking about the big picture and I think that's the right thing to do. He's thinking about the future, about what will happen when their ordeal is over. Harry's right to worry that whatever relationship he forges with Draco might not last once they're free from their current dilemma. They also can't waste time smooching when there's danger all around them.
Of course, Draco has the opposite opinion because he's in the opposite position. He's been lonely and injured for so long. He'd probably given up hope that he would see another person, much less be rescued; he can be forgiven for wanting to snatch whatever comfort he can before the worst happens.
All in all, this chapter hit upon all the unspoken issues lying between these two men and expressed it very accurately indeed. It was perfectly written; I could even foresee Draco's name-calling when Harry tries to explain why he thinks he can change how he feels about men! :P
Great work.
Of course, Draco has the opposite opinion because he's in the opposite position. He's been lonely and injured for so long. He'd probably given up hope that he would see another person, much less be rescued; he can be forgiven for wanting to snatch whatever comfort he can before the worst happens.
All in all, this chapter hit upon all the unspoken issues lying between these two men and expressed it very accurately indeed. It was perfectly written; I could even foresee Draco's name-calling when Harry tries to explain why he thinks he can change how he feels about men! :P
Great work.
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! whoot! go harry and draco! lol love this chapter! can't wait for more!
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! And all they did was kiss! Draco needs to get his priorities straight...erm...pun not intended! Poor Harry one kiss and BAM he is like a lovestruck kid. And poor Draco...apparently sex is akin to breathing in his book! Hahahahahaha! nice chapter! Thanks!
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am always so amused when Harry fights his feelings. I'm glad that he gave in, if only momentarily to his desires. I think it might make things easier for them, an outlet, but it will also complicate matters. Another fantastic chapter. I'm looking forward to more. I know that the lull won't last long, and I can't wait to see where else you take us.
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! It's about damn time : ) Harry needs a smack upside the head still. I hope he's not going to do anything really bad to save Draco's life. That line about Draco not wanting him after he does what he has to do worries me. Lord knows what you have planned but I hope it doesn't work! I know this is a horror story but I'm putting my bid in for a happily ever after for these guys. lol@ Harry trying to convince himself he's giving into Draco for the other boy's own good...lol
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! I just hope he's not setting them both up for some major heartbreak. I sooo need chapter 20!