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for Forgive Those Who Trespass

by Lomonaaeren

person rAiNwAtEr
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens. Me oh my. Please continue.
person landra
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey there!
I think your story is great!! it is the perfect mix of dark and other ^^!!! I really hope you're updating very, very soon!!!
lan
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN! So their trust has been solidified and tested for real this time. This is definitely a major milestone in their relationship and I love the last line to this chapter. It was nice to see Harry needing Draco to shield him for a change. The whole veil thing was a total mind fuck for Harry, poor thing. I hope Harry doesn't have to face an more dead relatives and friends because seeing his parents would be too much I think. I hope Sirius is in a better place and that what he was saying wasn't even half true. Now I'm really curious to see what Harry's plan is because it can't be what I thought it was.
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry.....was it really Sirius? Or was Draco telling the truth? I don't know! Only Harry saw Sirius! Wahhhh! Please update soon!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 23!!!
person DBZVelena
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco's voice, its at the center of the maze isn't it.
And Harry will get it back for Draco and with it his soul.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 22! Why swallow Draco's voice? What did Robert need it for?
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor draco. why did they need to enter his soul to take his voice? And whats gpoing to happen whne they finally get through all the pensives? Oooo! I'm excited! Thanks for the update!
person misslala
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is one of the most emotionally charged chapters yet. At least for me it was. The way that Harry felt for the first time why he was the one that Draco would want to cling to, the way he accepted that "duty". God. I had some tears there at the end when he promised he wouldn't leave him. That's awful what they did to Draco. To make him no one...

I still think that them tying Draco up that they knew someone was going to come to investigate. I'm really hating this Richard character. He's a bastard.

This is such a great story. I feel so bad for both Draco and Harry. I hope that they will get out of this madness soon! Can't wait for the next update, hon. Thanks for being so consistant and wonderful. You provide me with quite a bit of entertainment. :D
person curly88
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi I was wonderig how many pensieves there are compared to draco's ribs? Are there 9? I love you story, but one last question: how far our we in the story at chapter 21, halfway?
Thanks