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Whew! What a mess of a chapter! Very intense, and that kiss was very nice. :) Hah, I love how Draco pulled away and mouthed "I'll wait until you're ready." LOL God, they're both really in it thick now. Maybe now that Draco knows he isn't completely helpless, he'll be able to do something other than hang on to Harry's every word. That shadow plague was pretty wild. Another excellent chapter.

I was more worried about whether there would be character death. I can't be doing with character death, and I hoped that this would at least have a happy/hopeful ending despite all of the trauma. hehe. Can't wait for more! :D

Excellent chapters as always! I was shocked (sort of) by how Draco had chosen the conditions he would torture the boy under (it being a young boy, pain, etc, and all) but mostly I was appalled/sympathetic for past Draco. I'm glad we got to see fingere solis again (or whatever it is). I really like it for some reason. Maybe it's just the descriptions attached to it in the first instance you used it. Especially their minds as panes of glass. I'm also glad that Draco finally used magic! I understood it would be hard to hold a want and he couldn't speak, but I still never quite understood why he couldn't use magic. This chapter really cleared that up for me! And Draco needs to wait on the whole lets-have-sex-while-in-an-evil-torture-maze-of-suffering thing. Really. And I can't wait till we discover what happened to Draco's voice! And Richard (Kill the Bastard, Harry!!!! Crucio!!)! And how they're going to escape. And Ron and Hermione. ^___^ I'm just too curious for my own good I suppose.

Oh, what a lovely chapter....again, loved the last few lines! I love how you end your chapters but this one kinda got to me. Not sure why. Maybe I'm just pmsing right now..lol. I love this spell, told you that before, there's so much you could do with it in terms of symbolism and painting visual pictures for the reader. I was worried about the shadow thing getting Draco for a minute there. How ironic though that Harry is worried about Draco's dependence and lack of self-confidence in his abilities when he's suffering from a bad case of both himself. You say there's a hint about the ending, well, I give up, I'm gonna let myself just be shocked, saddened, or god forbid, happy when the ending arrives. I'm gonna wish for a happy one, even though that probably a long shot.

man this keep surprising me well it's 12am here and i,m going to bed keep doing this wonderfull story. can't wait for more.

I don't know how you do it, but once again you have produced a wonderful chapter. Please update again soon!

Who would have thought that sacrificing yourself could be used to run away. Harry's mind is so twisted sometimes. How can suicide seems to be the easy way out. O.o

This is a damn good story that I just got around to reading...but I want MORE. Please.

It would be a fucking awesome ending if Draco ended up in the maze forever with Harry by his side though, immortal through time but happy somehow with each other. <3

Poor Draco. And that boy he murdered? It was all show...but he's not really like them right? He's just really good at hiding his emotions behind a mask. I hate RIchard for making Draco like this. Oh well. Nice chapter! Update soon!

Ch. 22 I could imagine if the prisoners might want to pass into death if it meant the difference between that and more torture at the hands of the Unspeakables. I suppose that would count as willing death, even if it is the choice between a lesser evil and a greater one.