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When I first starting reading this chapter, I was hopeful, but as it went on, I was like, oh this is gonna be bad. I had almost lost hope until he entered Draco's mind. Speaking of which, that was one of the most intimate, non sexual scenes I've read yet. Also, it's amazing how you managed to take us into Draco's mind while placing us into Harry's at the same time. The way Harry revealed himself to Draco while in there was so fucking cool. Again, great writing. Things should be really different between them now, no walls...but I'm sure Harry will manage to try to construct a few anyway, lol. OK, I have a idea what is coming now, and I hope there's another way, and I also hope Richard is at the center so Draco and Harry can whoop his ass! :)

Sooo need chapter 26!!!

That was the most heart-wrenching scene in the whole fic. Wonderful. I love what Draco was mouthing towards the end....*Mine* Very nice. Thank you.

What an absolutely intriguing spell that Harry used. :D A very nice chapter. :D I haven't got anything productive to say other than I loved it, and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Ch. 25 Excuse me. I meant, turns him over to the maze spider. (My hands were a little shaky.) I've read stories in which the worst that happens to captured prisoners is rape and torture. Your story proves there are much worse things than that. :O~~~~~

I Loooooovvee this story...it is without a doubt one of the best and most creative i have ever read, especially on this site. You truly are a talented writer and that's coming from a fellow writer! So many of the stories on this site are written terribly and it's such a relief to find one so good. I'm sad for it to end! I hope you'll do a sequel! Oh please please do a sequel!!
Best Wishes and keep on writin'!

AUGH!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!! YOU DID IT AGAIN!!!!!! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK! As soon as Richard said, "How did she taste?" I was like, "OH FUCK NO!!! NO!!! HE DIDN'T!!!! NONONONONONONONONONONONO" but he DID!!!!! God, that was a GREAT twist, and you TOTALLY caught me off-guard (yet again!) LOL *loves*

Alright, I'll ask you this again, where you actually have a chance of answering (since I asked in your oneshot, which technically wouldn't bode a response since it's only one chapter).

Do you work? Like, do you have an actual job? Because, seriously, HOW do you have an occupation and still have time to come up with all of these AMAZING original plots?????? AND not only that, but you have SO MANY! Even when you're working on 2 or 3 WIPs, you still post several oneshots at random!!! WHAT IS YOUR SECRET???

Whatever it is, keep it up! Loved the chapter!!! Need more!

Oh my God....I almost cried...I had to cover my mouth when I read that. It was so horrifying....he ate her. His friend who he had sacrificed so much for.....That was so sick. Richard the douchebag....Oh GOD! Poor Draco.....Jesus....Anyway EXCELLENT chapter! I was thorougly horrified by it!

Ch. 25 This Richard is an absolute fiend. I doubt very much if even Voldemort stooped so low as to making his people eat each other. I hope when Harry finds him, he touches him to the maze spider. >:E

Oh my GOD I love the fucked-up-ness of this story!!! I know I don't review even HALF as often as I should because you are one of my heroes, and seriously, I do a happy dance every time I see your name on the list!!! I am steadily growing more terrified for the ending and what Harry plans to do...because I SO want him and Draco to end up together!!! But I trust you, so I will stick with you to the end. *whimper* I just hope Richard dies a horrible, painful, slow, torturous death (or gets replaced as the 'never-ending sufferer' in the maze for what he did to Draco, that miserable bastard!!!)

I absolutely LOVE how you keep Harry positive and strong despite everything that he and Draco have endured. And I LOVE the way their relationship is playing together!!! I totally see Harry as the strong one, steady as a rock, and able to bear everyone else's burdens as well.

That being said...Lom, I love you. Thank you for the Sirius chapter. Because, siriusly (haha) no one can be strong all of the time, and I'm SO GLAD that Draco was there for him to be the strong one in the face of Harry's weaknesses!!! I think that is currently my favorite part of the entire story (but I reserve the right to change that in case they end up having sex at some point...)

Keep it up! Again, I'm sorry that I don't review as often as I should, but I hope you remember that I read every new chapter and LOVE it!!!