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I suspected it but I still hoped...

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.....

::sigh:: i guess we all knew that was coming...maybe you'll throw in a twist though? maybe richard wasn't lying but he still doesn't really know how to use the maze properly and that spell will do something unexpected? I'm so very afraid now, more than I was in all the other chapters. you're killing me here! Wrap this up soon!

This story is just amazing!! I just can't get enough! You are brilliant and your writing style is superb!!
But why aren't letters on the 7th and 8th Pensieve??

I'm so impatient, lol. I finish reading one chapter and I want another. Oh, I knew it had to be flesh! Ugh, but for it to be Pearl's, that didn't occur to me. Also, I want to find out what other memories were in the Pensieve...and I'm so clueless because I still don't know what Harry's plan is. Except for being very brave, self-sacrificing, and Gryffindor-like. Er, he wouldn't make himself part of the maze would he? That should be impossible...since he can't exactly remove his own ribs and voice and fingers and such, yes? Although the fingers weren't really important important...*shudder* Scary possibilities. Great chapter!

Sooo need chapter 27!

Ch. 26 That was drastic and I can see how it had the potential to go wrong. I can understand why someone like Snape would sneer at Harry's attempts to play the hero. Much of what he does looks like risk-taking coupled with the sheerest amount of dumb luck.

However, since he obviously isn't a scholar like Hermione, this is the kind of behavior that works well for him. I'm just hoping it stands up when he meets Richard. I'm not sure Harry even understands what kind of person he's dealing with. I've come to believe Richard genuinely wants his stated goal--to allow wizards to suffer grievous wounds without being crippled or allowing loved ones to die. He's a true fanatic: a person willing to destroy people in order to save the world.

I'm just wondering what his place at the center of the maze is.

Okay, thanks for telling me! I wouldn't have figured it out otherwise ^-^'
wow, with chapter 26 you really outdid yourself on the 'awwwww how sweet they love each other that much!' thing there...not that thats bad, sometimes it can be better than a sex scene. Which btw it was!

You draw up the deepest, most frightening parts of who I am. Incredible.

As if Draco would let Harry go now, after what he had been shown.

Damn. That was just... wow. I'm normally very impressed with your writing, but this chapter, especially that last section, absolutely blew me away.

Fantastic job :)