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for Home for Christmas

by LostPetunia

schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah so sad! Any chance of a sequel with a happy ending? The mystery of what Harry has done is going to bug me too! LOL
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! The images! lol I was just reading all of your stories and clicked on this one without looking at the pairing. The whole time I assumed it was Draco untill I saw Snape's name and just like that rather disturbing images popped into my head without permission. It was a very well written story though! lol I can be dense sometimes but I almost ashamed to say that even though it was HP/SS I still liked it. I'm sorry Draco! lol okay enough with the crazy review, I must go read the rest of your stories now :-). Happy Holidays!
person Aoede
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I found this emotionally disturbing and I actually to have a pet. But then again it was probably the mint, I'm horribly allergic. Well I wouldn't mind a happier Christmas story but doesn't matter, I'm sure there is some writer that will deal out the "holiday cheer" again this year. Good fic except for the mint. ::winks:: Well ta. ::Goes of to take care of pet::
person Sabrith
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww poor harry
person Jilliane
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I liked the surprise ending...surprising for me anyway, and I usually don't like stories that don't have a happy ending. I see everybody asking what Harry did to drive Sev away. My guess is he shagged a girl? Isn't that why Sev had him dress up in the girly elf outfit?
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that i did want to kill myself after reading that last paragraph.... Other than that though, it was a really great one and i can hardly wait for the next one!! :D
person Kat
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I support that motion! Killing myself is not high of my list of things to do, but that might make even me consider it. What was that. I hope that would never truely happen to our Harry. I think the best way to express my view of the story is by saying I only skim read it. I simply continued to see whether it got any better as it went on, but sadly it didn't. Looking forward to the happier story though. I'll be sure to review that as well and hopefully give a better one than.
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGOSH I was just like what did Harry do that was so wrong to keep Sev away??? Please please please please tell me that in your mind they get back together even if you don't intend to write more lol. *hums* I'm thinking that even if they don't in YOUR mind, in MY mind, Sev comes back in the wee hours of the morning, and Harry crys and apologises and crys some more and wants to do anything to make up for it, and they have hot D/s make up sex and Sev stays ... and they live happily ever after. lol.

But seriously, I could feel the hurt when Harry woke up and realised it was a dream, that his Sev wasn't coming home! WAAAAAAA :(
~gorgeousbowneyes
person DarkKat
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What did Harry do to hurt Severus so much?
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... I really do feel like killing myself. But I don't quite get it: did the whole beating with the candy canes and the elf suit and heels all actually happen, or was it just some freudian dream in which Harry simply feels REALLY guilty?