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for Hidden in Plain Sight

by Katay

person smmz79
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I love how you go back to tell us how they got together and I love how you maintain each of their identities as well..... I am sorry to hear about your husband I hope all is well
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, this story is back! And better yet, your husband is recovering well. These are both very, very good things.
person Extraho
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh! i love your story!!!! and i'm eagery awaiting more! i hope you husband is oing better.
person smmz79
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm so draco is going to surprise his dad well won't he be surprised with what he finds.... I like this a lot especially how you keep going back to tell the story and you do that very well
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was great! So sad about Andy though! Been awhile, I was glad to see an update! Hope you can update again soon!
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more.
person carha
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, impressive story so far. Please update soon, as I would love to see what happens next.
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! Hope your husband is okay and you update soon!
Kindest Regards
ER
person DB1
schedule March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@13 cool update soon

*DB*
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.