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for Hidden in Plain Sight

by Katay

schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was interesting. I liked the way that Hermione and Lucius' marriage was revealed to Harry and Ron. I can't believe that Harry thought that she was dating George. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
person Citten
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boy I am laugh so hard right now!!! Boy I really hope that hermione and lucius make plans for this evening! :) that would just be the icing on the cake! I just bet you can come up with a thousand was to make the next couple of chapters go
person Citten
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well i loved the last two chapters! i really loved the quick review of how things developed between the two and i would have love to have seen more! (stupid owls.) well i love the whole last chapter EVERYTHING! i am really looking forward to reading the next chapter!!!! :)
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O *plays with the kitties freshly let out of the bag*

That... could not have gone much worse. Poor Hermione, her friends don't even know a thing about her.
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is easily the cutest proposal I've ever seen. Trust that bastard to have innocent little Teddy spring a huge question like that on her to see her reaction. Excellent.

Can't wait to see when the cat gets let out of the bag! Oh hell, you've got a whole sackful of cats to let out and I want to see every last one. I love your writing style, and can't wait for more.
person smmz79
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah another chap.... and areally nice one too... you kind of summed it all up for us up until present day.... and you left on a cliffie!!!!! very nice..... anyways please updaye again!!!!!!
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading more to see what happens when Harry raids Malfoy Manor.
person carha
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could you leave us hanging there?!?!? Please update again soon!
person smmz79
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is going to be good.... i bet hermione is going to be pissed and they are in for a big surprise when they find out... oh please update soon i can not wait to see what happens
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More! I adore this fic and I look for more all the time. I just wanted to let you know that I am still a faithful reader of this fic and I love it to pieces so don't stop writing.