AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Hidden in Plain Sight

by Katay

person Citten
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh Great chapter!!!!!!! i am glad that things are starting to get settled for you! :) how is france? (you lucky devil you!) i am really happy with the chapter! they both got what is coming to them! boy what is it with some men that they just cant see past thier own noses?! well at least ron is grown up, now harry is a different story altoghter, he is an idoit! :P poor lucius he has a right to be totally pissed at her 'friends' (loved the choice of ice cream--my favorite!) well i wonder what is wrong with hermione!? i do hope that you have the next chapter coming and really soon too!!!!!!!!! i loved the part that you described her and changing and the boys know they where looking at the new Mrs. Malfoy! that was so cool! so what has happened to hermione!?!?!?! i am dying here! that is just a terrible cliffy! UPDATE PLEASE! :)
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I can actually visualize Lucius Malfoy storming though his manor shouting "Woman!". lol Great update, I can't wait for more!
person smmz79
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... you seriously cannot leave us on this cliff.... great job with the confrontation..... loved the chap
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione, I hope she will be alright. I think that Ron and Harry are both idiots thinking that Hermione had to tell them everything about her life. At least Ron was a bit more mature. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Larrabee
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods, Harry and Ron are such assholes. They don't know if they can forgive her?!? WHAT THE FUCK!

She should ever deign speak to them again. They never cared about her, Harry turned his back on her when Ron cheated, neither tred to find out about her curse, or her health.

And they both think they have the RIGHT to be mad, to be upset, to need time to calm down, because Harry doesn't like secrets. What an ASS. HE is Teddy's godfather, but only when it was convinient. Ron was Hermione's boyfriend, but only when it was convinient. They were both her friends, but only when it was convienient, during the war they used her for her brains. And after as a care-taker for another's godchild.

I wish she would grow some balls and get them out of her life permantly. Especially, after the called her a traitor and a whore. And a MUDBLOOD?!?

I also wish there would have been a cure, so that she might have had a child with Lucius.

idk... they need to pay. ASSHOLES!!!

*ends rant*

All the best,
Elaine
schedule September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I lovee your story, it's just so different, Lucius and Hermione keeping it a secret. I hope you will be updating soon, because I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good job :D
person Ithilwen
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is a great story!

I hope you will finish it!!!

Since I would love to see what the reactions will be when the two men come too again lol.
And yeah, I think they should be afraid the witch they just made cry. And possibly her Husband!!

Update SOON!
person DB1
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@21. oh wow i love that they finally know but i cant wait to see their reactions. i love the story!! update soon!!

*DB*
person smmz79
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG what an awesome way for them two to find out and here i was thinking that she would tell them over dinner.... great job... oh i can not wait to hear what happens next.... great job
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh and the cat's out of the bag! What a way for Harry and Ron to find out eh? Walking in on them in flagrante delicto. Oh man. That's got to be worse than walking in on your parents. lol Great update, I really can't wait for your next update!!