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this is going to be fun! i really what to know who is yelling though. i am glad that you updated and i am looking forward to the next chapter! i hope you hubby is feeling better and the whole house is well. :)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

now i really want to know more about hermiones situation! there was a hard and very sore spot on the subject of other children. well now we can move on from ron and hermione, yeah! well now i really hope that you update soon-really soon! :) well lucius and draco can now become closer, lucius i know would like to see his grandson-well that will be an interesting meeting.

Oh that breakup was perfect. I love the drag out, knock down fights that lead to Hermione and Ron break ups, but that was just beautiful. It was so heartbreakingly real. It was real and fresh, just like the rest of your story. I really hope you can update soon because I just adore this story. This story goes beyond well written and I truly envy your writing and imagination.

@9 great chapter, update soon

*DB*

This was a great chapter. I am glad that Draco has returned and visited his father. I can't wait to read more soon.

Again, I like the way you use a non-linear style for your storytelling; it's not an easy style to accomplish, but you seem to have it down. Also, while you do make Ron a bit of a jerk in this, it's in an in-character way, not a completely irredeemable douche way. Good job!

So glad you updated, I loved this chapter especially the conversation between Hermione, Lucius and Draco. I felt so bad for Hermione when Draco asked her if they had children and she said "no children" but the way you wrote it sounded (at least to me) so painful. This must have been something with the curse she received in the war. I also want to thank you for writing about the embrace between Lucius and Draco and the fact that Lucius was the one to pull his son to him for the hug. I think this must have meant so much to Draco, to feel his father's love in such a long time.

You wrote the break-up between Hermione and Ron very well, I think it gives way to how future Hermione is able to be friends with Ron.

Look forward to the next update.

-- and I completely understand, I have finals this week coming up and one last project for one of my classes. I do my final presentation of material tomorrow and am putting the finishing touches on it today. Good luck with your finals.

So many new surprises. I liked the way you wrote Draco, he's still has the mockery of his child self, only now he's has some definite maturity in his manner. And Ron..tsk, tsk. He too has earned some maturity, and I am glad he's living up to his responsibilities.

i love this fic. it satisfies my need to cheat and look ahead in a story without actually having to cheat. so perfect. and really well written. i look forward to the next chapter.