rate_review Reviews

I very much enjoyed reading this story, a welcome departure from the fanfic I normally read.

If I might be honest, a few things jumped out at me:

* Everything seemed too easy once Harry defeated Voldemort. He didn't seem to have to really fight for anything.

* The sex was good and hot, but would benefit from revision in some of the wording (ie, "blue steel boner").

Still, the idea of Myrtle taking over Hermione and the ensuing dementor/essensential arc was very interesting. I admit I got a bit confused when Noir split into two child-versions of herself but that didn't bother me.

Overall, I quite liked it and definitely waited restlessly for updates.

ead all of the chapters when I first saw this story. I would put 'Issues' just a hair above this one 'cause of how many women Harry ended up with. This Mewtwo will be waiting on the next chapter.

this is great its really well written great story line

Just finished Chapter 12. Ever since the scene with the dementor, I've sort of had a feeling this was coming. Now I can't wait to see how we get Hermione back, and how Myrtle took her over.

I never liked Fudge...he was a dick. good job.

Nice chap

hahahahahaha! good one Harry! Nice to know hes usig the time turner for a good purpose! and what he does for the Malfoys and Ginny was good too! I'm proud of him! update soon yeah?

eh cliffhanger =[[[[

new chapters please =DD

love it so far

im loving this story so much =DDD keep coming out with new chapters please =]

That's horrible! I'm glad that they got what they deserved! Good job Harry and Hermione and Myrtle. And Ginny? what now? Who had her under the imperius curse? I want more! update soon!