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I loved this effing story!

Another great, liked how original it was. Good idea with all the kissed and the rehabilitation. Overall great story, keep writing them and sure as hell ill keep reading them.

Great story!

Intersting start, I especialy like the flashbacks to Myrtle's early life/unlife. It's a long standing grudge but I do have to always question why Ron would be given any kind of authority in battle. So he plays chess, big deal? Some the most brilliant military minds in history do well at chess, but that doesn't mean every one who does well in chess is a military genius. Plus Ron mostly shown playing with school kids, wizardsa t that, people not known for being overly bright. Plus the chaos or real battle doesn't fit well into chess with it's rules and restrictions. You know how each piece will move, and even a pawn could kill a king in chess. Nothing like that in real life, just because a first year got up to voldemort doesn't mean the kid could kill him, nor do most the death eaters be expected parad in little lines.

I must say that I truly enjoyed this story. It is totally different from any other H/Hr ship or any other HP fic I have read. Very good work.

Well, aren't ALL worthy bikes kick started?

WOW! WOW! WOW! Great story!

Rushed ending, but good none the less. Hope to see more stories like this one and Issues. :)

Excellent work.

Their daughter is a nice touch.

Can't wait to see what you come up with next!