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Oh, very nice. Hot, but with just enough emotion and angst to make it seem realistic.
Good Work
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Sad that they have to hide their relationship.
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I thought I had visited your page before and seen no stories. Hmmm. I think I see now what was missing from my pegging chapter. There was only one peg LOL.

This one-shot was descriptive, showing us their physical reactions. I got the further sense that their intimacy was perhaps only beginning. They agreed on their attraction, yet there was still an oddly remote sense to them as if neither of them was sure of the other, or they didn't yet know quite how they worked as a couple outside the bedroom. I see that the twosome had to be secret, but they seemed perhaps divided by that secrecy. It was keeping them from truly belonging with each other. If that makes any sense. If I keep on, this review will be longer than the story LOL.

The writing was really excellent. I'll check more of your stories later and probably take notes!

Damn, that's one hell of a secret! Very well written, very hot. Your descriptions are well done, makes you really feel what's going on between the two.
Off to check out more of your delicious talent.

This was your first fic? Great job! Short, sweet, and to the point. Slightly bittersweet, but not maudlin. Perfect. Hope you continue writing; I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

Typically I'm not a fan of short sotries but your's said what it needed to. Actually overall I was more impressed with your style of writing and the way you used your words than the story. It was a good read and I look foward to being able to read more of your works. Happy writing!
Unbloomed.

i love it!!! it was short, very sweet and just perfect.

Good story, bittersweet.

Wow! Thoroughly enjoyed myself while reading this! Your use of words creates beautiful imagery and adds to the power of reading. Fabulous work!

I liked this a lot, it was short but it got the message across and really gets your attention.
If this is your first, I can't wait for your second. :]