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for Somewhere

by isisfiredancer

person vyator
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahem...Oh oh oh!!! Yayness!!! Yay for the degree!! And Yay for having like 20 chapters to read in one go! And OH MY GOD YAY for the kiss! (Seriously made me melt!!) And yay for us being in it!! And I swear, I probably was the one who stole your tie first and gave you mine in return to prevent pouting! but but! OH YAYNESS!!! *Squeels*
person Selera
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Snarry is wonderful. What pulled me to slash.. is actually the non-con. Understand RL I hate the idea of rape and that but reading about fictional stuff just drives me haywire then I slowly began reading the others and well I find that slash stories are almost always better in the story basis. I'm sorry but I love my sex with story.
person Jan
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry!!! Having to go through that fright! Thought I got to say, loved the fact that it was only Severus that was able to help him out! Like a knight in shining armor !_! Ready to defend his prince in a blink of an eye. lol

*Gasp in surprise at the sudden pounce* *Blushes* Thanks! (about glomping me) What can I say? Your an amazing writer, as long as you keep writing so great I'll be here ^_!

Please update chapter 32 soon!

Jan ^_^
person poohbear74
schedule August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yey!

thank you ever so much!
I love this chapter to I can not wait for harry and snape to get together!
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so love this story
person Aatos
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can Harry meet a blue phoenix in the forbidden forest *i'll leave you to come up with why as it is your story* that ends up being a close familiar with him??
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*GREAT BIG HUG* in advace for tomorrow I know you can do it. I love that sev came and saved him but I knew he would. yeah yeah yeah kisss can't wait
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're right, you're evil...doing that to poor Harry and then NOT giving us a kiss!! (And I don't mean you, I mean them...they should be kissing and making it all better right now!)

As for the weapons yes, I suppose you could borrow them. They are great for intimidating people...though Firearms work better. However I believe they have extremely strict gun laws on your side of the pond don't they? So The bow and sword are it for you. the antique rifles stay here.
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. one thing though you have telekinesis and telepathy mixed up. telekinesis means you can move things with your mind, telepathy you can talk with your mind. keep writing, i can't wait to read more!
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER..CAN'T WAIT FOR THE KISS...AS FOR MY REVIEW OF CHAPTER 25, I THOUGH HE FOUND OUT ABOUT SEV'S FEELINGS BECAUSE HE WAS IN THE FORM OF A WOLF...AND HE WAS LICKING SEV'S FACE. HE AT ONE POINT FROZE...WOLVES HAVE HEIGHTENED SENSES...I THOUGHT HE COULD TELL, BECAUSE AT THAT MOMENT SEV WAS THINK OF HIS FEELINGS FOR HARRY