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by isisfiredancer

person Selera
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes Shale is wonderful. *Giggles* And Hermione is going to figure things out far to quickly.
person poohbear74
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you do.

I love this chapter,form another film, and then he kissed me!!!!!!, yay!! they kissed yay!!!!!!!!!!

Well, getting back to the real world, I really hope you make with your degree and that you dig to your heart's content.
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hottt...push me aginst a door Mr. Snape
person Diane
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just about broke my neck because of you. I was thinking about my review and went to pop my neck when I saw that there was another chapter. I whipped around hard enough it should have popped off. It was worth it though. My review was going to say something about how I wanted to see Severus and Harry show off their skills, but you beat me to it. That was everything I was looking forward to. Well, okay so I'm looking forward to the smut and all kinds of other stuff, but you get the idea.

Are we feeding the author fruit? *gives Isis pomegranate* This way, I'll get to keep you for a while if you eat the seeds! Wow the stuff I learned in 6th grade came back... different myths but it should work on Egyptians right?

Ah, but I'm not reviewing. I absolutely love the Immortals series. It was the first fantasy series I ever read. I've got three copies of the series, one of which has each book signed. You had me worried when I realized what you were going to do, but I had no reason to worry. That was well done. I loved it. I was worried you were going to have Harry lost to the animals or something because that wouldn't make any sense with his background.

Oh, before I forget again, chapter 33, small mistake where Harry says he'll meet Ron and Hermione for lunch. If I'm not mistaken, they already had lunch that day and classes were over at that point so it should be dinner.

Now where to? It's a shame I wasn't reviewing as you were writing, I hate trying to cram everything into a review for that much story. I do love having that much to read though.

So what's wrong with Malfoy? When do we get to find out? I'm glad you did well and got your scores.

OH! The mailing list! Please add me! Pretty please with naked Harry's on top and Sev's voice to tell you how to play with them? Mmmm his voice is so yummy.... *happy place* Oh wait. Wandered off there. E-mail adress! diane underscore rainwater at hotmail.com Yay!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! harry is soo cool! sev and harry are goiing to get caught if they are not careful! Herm and ron are VERY observant! *hands you a banana* I must feed the author of course! I can't wait for more!
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yummy!! I would have liked to see that. Is all that "Foreplay" Leading somewhere?

And Thanks for the Cactus. I Was wondering who sent it.
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, It's Christine, so you know.
Anyways I loved that chappie. I delight in the interaction between Snape and Harry.

Also, I think you have good taste in music - I listen to the Sweeney Soundtrack constantly. Lol.
person kunitsu
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alan Rickman song O_O where?!!! Ah that mans voice is just heaven *sigh*
Why would your dreams put me in a padded cell when I am alreay in one XDDDDD

Love the new chapter btw, I cant wait for Hermoine to find out about Harry and Severus although it would be nice just to keep her guessing for a while. Damn again, those kisses can be really hot and once again I cant help my squeel like a fangirl whenever I read those cute Harry/Severus moments :D
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well.. i.. umm.. not that i hate it, just kinda gross out by the killing and stuff like that. *hop onto a hippogriff & fly away so nobody catches me*
person Christine
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hiya, i'm enjoying your story,
Can't wait to read more.. Put me on the mailing list?
Bye