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for Somewhere

by isisfiredancer

person poohbear74
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YEY! smut!
Smut is good ,Smut is great!

I am happy to see you updated, I love this story and can not wait to see what happens next.

Yes, Ron is tasting foot!, I just hope that it is clean!lol.
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
isisfiredancer=love ^_^

That was awesome I loved it. Sorry you had to go all through that but the early posting made me happy :D

What you don't think Ron would like that? :P
person kunitsu
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was a hot chapter, really makes up for the cliffy. I know what you mean about the memo thing, even though I have a reminder on my cellphone I sometimes forget to look there

Thanks so much for The Bell *ish melting to Alan Rickmans voice*
person Winters Prologue
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much that I stayed up well past midnight (when I have work early tomorrow morning) because I just couldn't put it down! I absolutely love Shale he's soooooo cute, reminds me of my kitten that I had a few years back. And the blackbird bringing his "pebble" was so awesome. The characters that you have created are so wonderful and well thought out that I just can't help but smile as they speak. Specially Shale his playful nature is wonderful. You've captured Ron's jealous and git-like streak well as well.

anyhow email me when you update if you don't mind; gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
person karisma
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I DIDN'T MISS IT! *Insta-Mardi Gras Party!* very nice and verrrry hot!
person Dragonsnurse
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okies I will pick Blue up from the airport. I liked this it was good smut (wow that just sounds well corny) I liked that Harry at first remembered his experience with Rape as that would be a normal thing to do and some writers just ignore it, Harry had that reaction but was healed enough to continue with reassurance from Severus it wasn't over powering am I making any sense? Ok you can have Severus back dressed in tight leather this time and since it was such a good chapter you can have Haji for a private performance.
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.....
That was so sweet!
person Leentjef
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very very good chapter
keep up the good work and make the next chapter hot and tender
post sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY smut delicious hot heavy sweet smut I am so happy yes yes yes I think you did real good. As long as you hurt ron in someway I will be very happy. As all ways I want more
schedule September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I wasn't being overly dramatic.

as for the very first thought I had upon reading this chapter was: "Holy Hot Mansmut Batman!" then the next thought was "Oh wait, not reading Gordon/Batman smut right now." followed by "oh well, it's fitting"

What I'm driving at (at a slow speed and on a moped apparently) is that I absolutely adored the chapter.

also, I'm sorry you had to do it all twice, though glad the guilt trip worked.