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for Somewhere

by isisfiredancer

person Sara
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cool.SeverusxHarry very smexy! Your write the sex sence VERY WELLL!!! I give you cookies and oranges! I really like your story and i've been reading it for a while. The only thing I would have done different is made their bonding symbol be the same as their animagus or patronaus. It just seems like that would make more since to me. anyway I also think it would be cool if you showed Sev in his animagus for, just because panthers are cool. Update soon, please.
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Merry Christmas!! And awwwwwww... I lurf this story!
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That while filled with angst was beautiful I liked how you got the animals involved and how even though Harry can perform the patronus when the Dementors are around they are nothing to the thought of losing Severus so he cant perform the charm that made me go awwwww. Is Severus going to be a werewolf now? Is that what the claw marks are? Ok for this chapter and a quick update I will Tie Severus to your bed using silk ties naked of course and MERY CHRISTMAS written in whipped cream.
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear that you've seen a drop in reviews. I'm sure it's just that everyone is way too busy with the holiday. I know that's the reason I've been away. Stupid holiday preparations should be banned when they conflict with great story reading.

And we don't hate you, but we may or may not be forming up a lynch mob to make you write more...Though I can neither confirm nor deny that statement.

No killing Severus. It would really put a cramp in the story if you did.
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't hate you for almo st killing Snape, as long as he lives. It would be awful if he died right after bonding with Harry. Voldie and his merry band of henchmen need to taught a lesson. Not to mess with Harry's bond mate. That could be interesting, all the animals getting Harry's revenge.I wonder what kind of influence Harry would have on Nagini with his new powers? Thanks for the update and Happy Holidays.
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Sev is Safe!!
Or At least he had better be!!!!


person kunitsu
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are evil you know that *mock glare* jk jk

Ah well I am glad that Severus was saved in time, I do wonder what inflicted those wounds
person kirigirl
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sooo sweeet! And I hope Voldie gets his due... Mean man...Love this story!
person Leentjef
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter
keep up the graet work and post soon
bye bye
schedule December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sorry! i was busy and just got to read both chapters! i love it! Poor fawkes! i hope sev it gonna be okay!!! *Hands you a basket of fruit(with satsumas)* More please!!!