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for Letters From your Mystery Prince

by JaceDamian23

person HarryVik
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah the tension and excitement is rising steadily. Very good fiction, please keep it going, can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad, because often one encounters stories about Ron/Draco (and other parings) that just (how do you say it?)SUCKS!! Really seriously how do some people think, one can't help but wonder. That's why i'm glad, because this is one of the few fanfic i have read that are really good. Keep up the good work and stay out of the "bad fictions ally"!!!

schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually think this could develop into something really good. I like the back and forth of the letters. One thing that annoyed me though is that you kept writing "new" when you meant to say "knew". Let me know if you want a beta.