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i love this story please update please pretty please

brilliant chapter, cant wait for the next one. Poor Harry.

I love your idea, I think you need a beta though. I would love to continue reading it, but as Harry is explaining thing, you have incredibly long run on sentences. For example:

WOW! I am loving this story!

When it comes to Hermione's pairing, I think you should put her with Ron, and put Draco with the twin's.

Please update chapter 11 soon. ^_^

good chapter. poor harry. I so love salazar Slytherin. Oh and the defence that got sirius, brilliant.

good chapter.

I'm liking this story a lot! More please?

As for pairings: I'd love to see Hermione with the twins and maybe Draco with Ginny or Blaise (or both ;3 gotta love threesomes)

While the beginning of your story sounds a lot like another I started reading yours is much better written and further along. I like the pairing you've chosen for Harry and can't wait to see it fall into place. As for your question about who should Hermione be paired with... How are you going to be playing Ron? If you go with his usual attitude - all slytherings are evil and anyone connected to them is as well then he won't work for Hermione. He would never accept her being tom's daughter... he'd also turn on Harry the moment he found out he lusted or loved Snape and was friends with a Malfoy. The Twins on the other hand are more open minded and I wouldn't be suprised if the hat hadn't originally tried to put them in Slyterin so either or both of them would work. Draco would be harder to fit in... he's spent the better part of 6 years denigrating and bad mouthing Hermione (yes for something that is only partly true but still true as tom is a half-blood... you didn't say wether her mother was a witch or not .. this means at worst Hermione is only 1/4 and at best 3/4 wizarding blood) that's a lot of bad history to overcome. I don't think he would work. He can become a very good friend and even somewhat protective of her but I don't see them doing much by way of intimate relationships. (JMHO)
Can't wait to see your next update.

hi, i love your story. I think Hermoine should be with Draco. They make a lovely pair. I hope you update soon!!

ok for some reason i thought draco was in the threesome but i must be going nuts. Anyway it depends on what you want with Hermione... with ron you're pretty limited in character. I cant see him joining the dark side! Not even if they started giving out bunnies. Draco's serious so he'd be a good partner for her, able to deal with the constant studying and knowledge whereas fred and george would be able to distract her and bring some fun into her life.

Cant say i could choose really, love the fic though and cant wait for the next chapter.