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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 2 and 3
ERROR ALERT: Chapters two and three are one and the same word for word. Just thought that you might want to fix that HUGH error.
ERROR ALERT: Chapters two and three are one and the same word for word. Just thought that you might want to fix that HUGH error.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sinbad. Wow. Disturbing and powerful. There are a couple of little britpicking issues and beta issues (Lol. Like I can talk) but as far as content and storyline . . . I think it's fantastic. You go girl! ****
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December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...glad to see Severus stepping up and being the man! I hope Hermione gets better. I like this story, please continue!
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December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Hermione. I wonder what they expect to come of this since they don't intend to kill her. Please continue, this has me intrigued!
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh goodness, this is interesting. Hope to find out what happens next!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi Sinbad!
I must admit that I didn't review after the first updates,because I didn't know if the story pleased me enough.As I never write flames,because I think that all the writers always give their best and as there is no accounting for taste, I prefer to read only the stories that i like.But I must say that somewhere in the back of my mind I wanted to give the story another chance.The first chapter wasn't too bad and I wanted to know if it might not improve .CONGRATULATIONSit improved a lot.I wonder what will happen to Hermione once she is in the grip of Lucius,and how severus will fit into this pattern.
LOL SurevES Epans
I must admit that I didn't review after the first updates,because I didn't know if the story pleased me enough.As I never write flames,because I think that all the writers always give their best and as there is no accounting for taste, I prefer to read only the stories that i like.But I must say that somewhere in the back of my mind I wanted to give the story another chance.The first chapter wasn't too bad and I wanted to know if it might not improve .CONGRATULATIONSit improved a lot.I wonder what will happen to Hermione once she is in the grip of Lucius,and how severus will fit into this pattern.
LOL SurevES Epans
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Argh! You'd better post the next chappie right now or I'll have to scream and possibly stamp my foot in a childish manner! Gx
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.