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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story isnt too bad, you need to get a beta to fix your spelling errors, and you need to write longer chapters, what you are writing is annoyingly small! try and write a MINIMUM of 1000 words for every chapter
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story better and better after each chapter, im glad you made up your own kind of vamps instead of going with the traditional because that will actually make it all the more supsenful and better since no one will now really be able to predict the personality and attitude of the vampire clan. I love the fact that you added a little bit of a side story involving the small talk between harry and ron, that way the story wont seem like it is speeding to fast. Keep up the good work!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story...vampire stories are my very favorite! i hope that you will update quickly...
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome its perfect i really love this story and how different it is from the regular scheme of things
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!!
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it and i need more and i love you.:)
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update really soon
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update update update.....i like it a lot so far!
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I'm looking forward to reading more. The slow seduction, making Hermoine (and us) wait for when he actually takes her is a great idea. I hope you add chapters quickly.