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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just one comment. JK calls it christmas.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi ReiRei,
I assume you have an enormous fold yard in which you're breeding plot bunnies.Do you know that bunnies are animals that tend to shag like rabbits.(HIHI)Your yard must be overstuffed with plot-bunnies.But I must congratulate you,because you are known to be an excellent breeder.All your bunnies (stories) are well fed (elaborated),they are in good shape (I just love your style of writing)and when I consider the amount of reviews you get,your "breedings"are all exceptionals and I think your bunnies should be endowed with a "GOLDEN QUILL" for best fanfictions.
LOL Sureves Epans
I assume you have an enormous fold yard in which you're breeding plot bunnies.Do you know that bunnies are animals that tend to shag like rabbits.(HIHI)Your yard must be overstuffed with plot-bunnies.But I must congratulate you,because you are known to be an excellent breeder.All your bunnies (stories) are well fed (elaborated),they are in good shape (I just love your style of writing)and when I consider the amount of reviews you get,your "breedings"are all exceptionals and I think your bunnies should be endowed with a "GOLDEN QUILL" for best fanfictions.
LOL Sureves Epans
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. I loved it. I hope that you will write a sequel to it sometime. I think it would be nice to see if they continue or if they move on to different things.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would quote my favorite lines if it wasn't so hard on aff.net. I love your deliciously snarky tone and precise vocabulary (e.g. fornicates) whenever you're writing from Snape's point of view. The part about him feeling free to embellish about himself was cute. I love that Hermione's crying for a fictional character. Great ending line also.
nitpicks: there are some great steamy Ron/Hermione fics, but they're all on checkmated.com. also, shouldn't it be Avada and not Crucio to put Snape out of his mystery?
nitpicks: there are some great steamy Ron/Hermione fics, but they're all on checkmated.com. also, shouldn't it be Avada and not Crucio to put Snape out of his mystery?
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, auntbecky, JKRowling's vocabulary is re-edited for the American versions, so she might very well say Yule for the British version.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you leave this as a one shot, I will hunt you down and tie you to your desk chair to continue typing!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree, that there is no way in hell you should leave this a one shot!! It is to good!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.