rate_review Reviews

I've enjoyed seeing you grow as a writer from one chapter to the next and to sequal. They could have used a little work when it came to puncuation, but your ideas were good. I just can't understand why everyone sends Harry (or any mpreg) into labor pains. The pains are caused by the cervix dialating. Well, seeing as how men (in most fics) don't have one, it doesn't make much sense. There are other ways to tell if the baby is developed enough to be born. *waving hand* Not important though. Thank you for doing the sequal. It rounded things out nicely (no pun intended).

Cute chapter!!!

awesome story!!!

hahahaha cool chapter

Awwww. That ending was sooo sweet. I hope you do a new story soon. This story was just soo great. You are a truly amazing author. Wish I was a quarter as good as you. Maybe then I could write something that doesn't sound like a 13 year old wrote it. ||Sighs|| Oh well I guess I'm just going to have to take some classes. I wish this wasn't the end. I hope to see a new story like this out soon. You are an extremely good author.
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Sakura Maxwell-Minamino

I was going to say...the babies are coming!!!

I Love it. I Loved the first and this is no exception. I think that yours in one of the best Mummy crossovers I've ever read and from now on, I shant read another unless written by you! Keep on Truckin!

Awe...it's such a happy story!

The story is already over? Dang! I was hoping that you would continue it onto the second movie.

I was wondering where you had gotten the last name...the actor huh.