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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving how you have written Hermione. It would be so easy to have her as a Promiscuous slut, Brazenly enjoying every minute of enslaving her own personal sex squad. But instead you are taking the moral high road(as high as you can get really, whilst writting smut) and leaving Hermione with as much integrety as possible given the situation. So Kudos to you!!!
Also, If it is in your grand scheme of things, and bear in mind I don't like to nit-pick, Having Draco as her true love is going to be very predictable. If it's not, even better!!
loadsa hugs
Slytherin-Princess
XxXxXx
Also, If it is in your grand scheme of things, and bear in mind I don't like to nit-pick, Having Draco as her true love is going to be very predictable. If it's not, even better!!
loadsa hugs
Slytherin-Princess
XxXxXx
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh, I met a Hellenist at Rutgers University sometime in the late 1990s. She couldn't find any other ones at the time, even on the Internet. Your train of thought on Valentine's Day is reasonable though.
I like how she dealt with the gifts from Zabini and crew. That's weird about how the spell affected Harry differently--I hope we learn more about it?
I like how she dealt with the gifts from Zabini and crew. That's weird about how the spell affected Harry differently--I hope we learn more about it?
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February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that Harry doesn't seem affected by the spell anymore. I think that may have to do with him loving Ginny more. I can't wait to read more to see what happens.
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@27 great chapter, poor draco will be pissed if it isn't him that is her true love. update soon
*DB*
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I am glad that Draco told Hermione the truth about how he got her the ring before the spell and that he truly loves her. I still hope that Severus is her true love, but I guess it would be alright if Draco was. I look forward to reading more.
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering why the Malfoys got her a cloak! His expressing serious interest before the school year even started explains a lot. Very sweet chapter.
It occurred to me a couple of weeks ago that Aphrodite really shouldn't care about Valentine's Day, since Aphrodite predates St. Valentine. No idea what you would replace Valentine's Day with though.
The apology gifts from the Slytherin boys were extremely creepy, since they're only remorseful since they're terribly in love with Hermione. Poor Seamus has it bad--six books! And he was the only one in an active relationship too. I wonder if Lucius is going to continue craving Hermione a lot?
It occurred to me a couple of weeks ago that Aphrodite really shouldn't care about Valentine's Day, since Aphrodite predates St. Valentine. No idea what you would replace Valentine's Day with though.
The apology gifts from the Slytherin boys were extremely creepy, since they're only remorseful since they're terribly in love with Hermione. Poor Seamus has it bad--six books! And he was the only one in an active relationship too. I wonder if Lucius is going to continue craving Hermione a lot?
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading all 26 chapters! and I loved it! Can't wait 'til V-Day! Only 10 more days... YES! I really want to know what's gonna happen!
~Talon
~Talon
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope you realise, that your story is rally great stuff! i love it!!!
and i can't wait the 14th...
vic
and i can't wait the 14th...
vic
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah i'm a hopeless romantic too but, you still have about two months to go before Valentine's Day in the story. I also thought it was kind of funny when in the letter to Eros in the last lines sounded like a monlogue from Star Wars, " please please help me Eros, your my only hope" I didn't know if that was your intention but i loved it anyways. Greek mythology is one of my favorite kinds of mythology and I loved how you incorporated the goddess of love and her son into the story and used their characteristics to help the story along. Keep it up and don't keep us in suspense for too long for the next chapter!