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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! It's my first time commenting you and I thought it was for the best that way. Anyways I have seen the way you have grown through your writing each time I read a chapter. Keep up the good work! Lovely story by the way it is something I have never read before.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@34 wow great ending...*cries* cause its all over!! you have to write more stories soon!!!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good read! Thank you.
I especially loved how you managed to keep the reader guessing. I also loved the different ways Hermione has sex with different people - it's not all just one orgasm after the other, there are bad experiences, too, as well as some she enjoyed but doesn't want to repeat. Just like in real life.
It's very ethical - telling us all the time what is right and what is wrong, or what you think is. Is it your goal to teach us that? I think it wouldn't have been neccessary here.
I've never read a story featuring Greek Gods before. It was certainly interesting, though I guess that makes this a bit of a Crossover to me. Gods are not Canon, and whether you believe them to be real or not, they seem a bit out of place in the Harry Potter world. Not that that's a bad thing, I enjoyed them very much.
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I especially loved how you managed to keep the reader guessing. I also loved the different ways Hermione has sex with different people - it's not all just one orgasm after the other, there are bad experiences, too, as well as some she enjoyed but doesn't want to repeat. Just like in real life.
It's very ethical - telling us all the time what is right and what is wrong, or what you think is. Is it your goal to teach us that? I think it wouldn't have been neccessary here.
I've never read a story featuring Greek Gods before. It was certainly interesting, though I guess that makes this a bit of a Crossover to me. Gods are not Canon, and whether you believe them to be real or not, they seem a bit out of place in the Harry Potter world. Not that that's a bad thing, I enjoyed them very much.
Valentine's Day was clich
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi the last chapters were brilliant but i could not get to the picture of the dress, i was hoping you could give me a link to it. The song was perfect for the chapter.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story I feel bad for Snape yet I'm Happy for Draco. It realy was a well writen story.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the wedding of Draco and Hermione. I thought that what Hermione told Severus was exactly what he needed to hear.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was absolutily brill on of the best moresomes iv read congrats on a grate story lots of love
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww good, I'm glad it was Draco that was her true love. I assumed it would be him, but it was a great ending :)
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done! Thank you for that story. :)
I'm glad that you liked the link. I know that finding like minded people can be tough when we don't know where to begin. It's nice to know that I was able to cast a bit of light upon your path.
I'm glad that you liked the link. I know that finding like minded people can be tough when we don't know where to begin. It's nice to know that I was able to cast a bit of light upon your path.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very well written and a heck of a lot of fun, (except for the gang rape...they were not punished enough!). I applaud you and look forward to another story soon. I am already reading Heart and Soul and loving it. Thanks!