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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think what made me really treasure this story is the way Hermione tried to resolve the spell's affect on other people and herself. I wondered why she struggled so much with her body's needs. It is as though she thought by denying herself her wants would just go away.
If she was a slag, why not embrace it and be that? If she was a woman who wanted more than her fair share (ie. one man and one woman) and winded up receiving the acceptance of two different men who loved her, what would keep her from embracing that?
Snape is a deeper mystery here than in most stories.
If she was a slag, why not embrace it and be that? If she was a woman who wanted more than her fair share (ie. one man and one woman) and winded up receiving the acceptance of two different men who loved her, what would keep her from embracing that?
Snape is a deeper mystery here than in most stories.
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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I'm actually crying. None of the other fics have ever made me cry. This was an amazing idea and story. Congrats.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a ride. i loved every minute of this story, the way snape was portrayed touched me the most...although i do believe draco and hermione were perfect for each other. your knowledge of the greek gods blew me away, such well written work, and i do have to say i loved the lucius/severus/hermione/draco scene, it was excellent. very good work, i look forward to reading more from you. x
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
http://www.betterlivingthroughdesign.com/2008/02/hermaphrodite_candle_set.html
Only semi-related, but you might find this interesting (if aff doesn't make this link vanish)
Only semi-related, but you might find this interesting (if aff doesn't make this link vanish)
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you pushed Severus forward as a more serious candidate, because before that, Draco was the only serious contender. I couldn't figure out how any of the other dudes could be her true love if she wasn't really into them already, but then you had Eros come and reduce the field to two. It was a good resolution to the true love issue to have Severus not be fully emotionally available, since Draco has pined away for so long and Severus needs someone to love him. I especially like the scene where she talks about Severus with Ginny and accosts him in his office afterwards.
It's a bit overly tidy that all the guys married the girls that Hermione sent them to the dance with, but that's a minor quibble.
I don't know if the Hellenist I met had a patron god or goddess. I didn't know her that well and didn't inquire about the details of her worship. I wish you luck in finding other Hellenists though.
It's a bit overly tidy that all the guys married the girls that Hermione sent them to the dance with, but that's a minor quibble.
I don't know if the Hellenist I met had a patron god or goddess. I didn't know her that well and didn't inquire about the details of her worship. I wish you luck in finding other Hellenists though.
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved it
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story this was. Brillaint. Tood bad for Sev though... maybe next time. Lol :)
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, what a happy ending! Very nice, I was hoping it would be Draco.
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm speechless.
FANTASTIC!
FANTASTIC!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great job! i know i haven't commented, but i've followed this story all the way through! you really improved in your writing skills, and you kept the plot interesting until the very end. write more soon! :)