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by Tassanaburrfoot

person Aleria18
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to leave you a quick note to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. It's well thought out, and written. Thank you for sharing it with us. I also wanted to comment on your author note for this chapter. You are no where near the only one in the world today that worship or revere the old ones. :)
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing story:)
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I laughed. I sighed. It got a little warm in here. It was brilliant!! Can't wait to read through your others. :)
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh.. god. my heart breaks for severus. I think in a way, one is either a severus/hermione or a dramione.. theres nothing in between. seeing draco walk away with the girl while severus is condemned to lose the one he is in love with yet again.. its just so not right. i know that you prefer the dramione thing but to my severus/hermione heart it just seems so unfair.. I'm almost scared to read the next chapters. I'm hoping you somehow rig things up so that lucius, severus, draco and hermione can all still find pleasure in each other without guilt.. but i have a sneaking suspicion you're going to go the way of romance with the wedding and the devotion and no messing about with professors or parents. I love the way you write.. if you get around to it.. could you write a story where severus gets the girl finally?
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was extremely um, well there are no words. I will say this, very few writers could take an idea such as this and put just about every emotion into their reader. You did a wonderful job.

There were times I was so mad I actually wanted to hit someone. Times I cried, or laughed (Literally) out loud. I felt the love between Draco and Hermione, and the anguish she felt at having to hurt anyone.

I was a little repulsed with the scenes one the rape and what the happened between the four at the Manor, but in order to understand everything happening in the story, I had to read it. No, I'm not complaining, it made your story more detailed and you had your reasons for it. I myself know that there are things in a story line people may not like, or appreciate why it's in the story line, and you do give fair warning.

I have read Heart and Soul as well and intend on reading the sequel to that. I do enjoy your works, and I love that you don't feel that because your stories are posted on AFF that you must include smut in everything. It's nice to read something every now and then that isn't filled with lemons and limes at every turn. Don't get me wrong you do write lemons very well, but I also enjoy your stories that aren't just that.

I have rambled long enough. Please continue to write more fics. You do great works.

:) B.

Oh can you maybe do me a favor and write a Hermione/Fred, there aren't a lot of those. If not I understand. Thank you for writing the stories that you have.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And you've lost me at the gang rape and her ability to miraculously avoid the traumatic psychological reprecussion of such a horrible act. pity i really did like the story too.
person luna4917
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have just spent the day reading this incredibly wonderful storyy and I have to say, I wish it wasn't over. It was truly wonderful to see how Draco stepped up and helped Hermione learn as much as possible about the curse, defend her to the clueless and support her in her....predicament. I adore stories that show that Draco isn't always the arse JK wrote him to be. I have always believed there is more to his character that was never seen.

As for anyone who questions the existence of the Goddesses and Gods, they obviously don't see with open eyes or they would see the beauty that is given to them everyday courtesy of the Immortals. I am Wiccan in faith and know the truth of the Goddess and all that is given to us. That's what made this story for me. Knowing that is exactly something Aphrodite would do.

As we all learn in youth, "Be careful what you wish for."

Thank you for sharing.
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
as cheesy as this is i lvoed the story and the ending made me cry.
keep up the awsome work.
schedule November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a long sexy ride. Thank you for writing such a thrilling story. Congratulations on finishing! I am very impressed and quite enjoyed it. Thanks and bravo!
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's one of my favorites. I love the fluffy ending between Draco and Hermione. Well done.