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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and I can't wait to read more. Will any more people be touched? Will someone read a spell from the book? I really can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! It's true that Aphrodite does love chaos. She's a little..um...michieveious. :p Anyway, I like how you added in Dumbledore's sexuality there, although, it would have been interesting if the spell effected all males. That's just the imp in me talking though. That does beg the question, could there possibly be some girls that are effected? Can't wait to see who her one true love is!
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I am glad that she has realized that Harry, Ron, and Draco are looking at her even if she doesn't know why. I am glad that Severus is involved now. I loved the sneaky way he became involved, that was great. I can't wait to read more to see what he does to her, especially since she is still unaware of what is going on.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very entertaining, I look forward to see what the next four months would bring and who will be her true love:-))
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I am glad that she now knows about the spell. I can't wait to read more to see how far each of the affected men go with her and also if she avoids the other males in the school. I hope her true love is either Draco or Severus, but if not then Lucius would be a great choice.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please more .. later for now
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. I think that Snape was a little too lenient with her punishment by having her clean and inventory books, but I love how she is now getting men to notice her even though she doesn't realize it yet. I hope that Snape becomes one of them by getting upset with her and grabbing her. I can't wait to read more soon to see how Hermione reacts when either Draco, Ron, or Harry approaches her about their new feelings.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They're teenage boys! Of course love translates to lust here.
It's a great premise, with potential for humor, angst, and romance; I'd love to see where you take it, especially if you play up the humor (but that may not be in your vision). I like the bit where Snape deliberately keeps her after class. It's interesting that Aphrodite would answer the prayer of someone who doesn't believe in her. It'd be great if you could address that at some point--if it's meant as a Midas touch punishmenr, or if Aphrodite pitied Hermione, or if Aphrodite was just plain bored.
It's a great premise, with potential for humor, angst, and romance; I'd love to see where you take it, especially if you play up the humor (but that may not be in your vision). I like the bit where Snape deliberately keeps her after class. It's interesting that Aphrodite would answer the prayer of someone who doesn't believe in her. It'd be great if you could address that at some point--if it's meant as a Midas touch punishmenr, or if Aphrodite pitied Hermione, or if Aphrodite was just plain bored.